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Beggar of love (repost from Dark Passions)
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Beggar of love I am a beggar of your love Occasionally crossing your path As you rush towards your busy everyday life. I reach out my hand in the worn out glove, Eyes open wide, pleading, praying for warmth. Hoping to collect a node, a smily or simply a "Hi". Sometimes you don't even notice I'm alive. Brushing against my shoulder, passing me by, Ignoring the scream of my wide open eyes and I cry... Another time, you're so generous and kind. As if you notice the words scrapped on my sign, Like today, when you pause for a minute and stay... I feed on little crumbs of your attention. Your little crumbs are my only redemption. The only thing keeps me going, still I starve... I'm just a little beggar of your love. |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
How wonderfully put. Excellent poem. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Thanks, one who understands  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love the title and the poem. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello LM, This is a wonderful poem and I really enjoyed it. So many people need so much love, it seems we all beg for it at times!! Great Job!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LM~ Interesting tie-in with the 'beggar'. Sad. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
LM, I would have emailed you this, but you are not listed. I just had to show you how GPTA (great poets think alike) This is a poem I posted in July. A Poor Diet I attempt to survive without love. The lack of sustenance takes a toll. I waste away. I grow weary of begging for a meal. I subsist on the barest crumbs which you drop in my path, as you casually pass by. I devour them hungrily, yet still I starve Just had to share that with you. As I said on DP, I so relate to this poem, and you worte it beautifully. Sandra |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, Sandra!! This is so coooooool... I haven't even been here on July and I didn't read this, I swear... This is just amazing.... Thank you for replying on it here as well I promise to e-mail you so you'll know how to reach me. Victoria: thanks a lot Sunny: thank you so much for the worm reply it means a lot to me, I love your work as well. Marge: Thank you, it is kinda sad... I just can't do nothing about it. |
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