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Beth
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-09-02 06:11 AM



I put pen to paper
Without a word to write
I have so many feelings
Im trying to fight.

I dont know whats right
or wrong
If its here
That I really belong.

I see the sun rise in
the morn
But I still havent slept
and its already dawn.

And I cry silently in
my heart
So anxiously
Wanting old feelings to
part.

I want you to see the
new me
Understand
How happy I can be.

I dont want you to hear
the same old story
Me jealous
of other peoples glory.

I dont want to appear
gutless
And have you not know what
to say
but I dont want to see
"did you hear that chick the other day"

"She's so self obsessed
And such a bore"
I want to see things all good
not feel pain anymore.

Maybe I should take to chance
to say thankyou
For making some feelings true.

Maybe I should admire you and
reply
I wont need to question myself
or ask why!!


*I wrote this for everyone at passions..(in a silly kinda way)...I just wanted to let you guys know I am sorry I havent been here in awhile but I have been thinking about all of you*



[This message has been edited by Beth (edited 09-02-2000).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2000-09-02 07:47 AM


Beth what a well written poem, take care of yourself always.  
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-09-02 08:47 AM




Why thank you my dear.  I hope your absence has been for good reasons and everything is fine with you.  Lovely poem and full of heart.  

Sven
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3 posted 2000-09-02 12:09 PM


Wonderful Beth. . . It's good to see you get some of those feelings out. . .

We'll leave the light on for you. . .

----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-09-02 02:30 PM


Beth, wonderfully written poem, poetry is a beautiful thing and keep expressing yourself through words.  

"I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
5 posted 2000-09-02 03:20 PM


How sweet you are for the thank you.
Your poem is warming and kind
So, thank you!
Liz

Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
6 posted 2000-09-03 01:25 AM


~Marsha, Thankyou so much for your reply~

~Mark, My reasons have been good but I am so much better now...And Im back for good hopefully...hahaha..thankyou kindly~

~Sven, Thankyou deeply...Your reply means alot to me...Hey could you switch the light off sometimes...I do need my beauty sleep...LOL...~

~Brian, Finding the emotions is the easy part...It's opening and letting them out...I guess I'll get there...Thankyou so very much~

~Liz, I am so very happy that you liked this..It means a great deal to me..Thankyou again~

Thanks again to everyone!!


poutprincess
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia
7 posted 2000-09-03 01:41 AM


I missed your poetry Ree...im happy you are back!  
~Dawn

"Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos



Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
8 posted 2000-09-03 01:44 AM


~Dawn, Thankyou so much for your reply..Im happy to be back and hopefully I can start writting well again~
Trew
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
9 posted 2000-09-03 02:43 AM


Hiya Beth!
Welcome back.  Saved you a seat!
Nice writing, by the way!
But that's a given...

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
10 posted 2000-09-03 02:52 AM


Hello Beth, haven't come across your work before, but it sounds like you belong here. Welcome back and I look forward to reading more from you.

Be well
Kethry


"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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