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Thankyou |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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I put pen to paper Without a word to write I have so many feelings Im trying to fight. I dont know whats right or wrong If its here That I really belong. I see the sun rise in the morn But I still havent slept and its already dawn. And I cry silently in my heart So anxiously Wanting old feelings to part. I want you to see the new me Understand How happy I can be. I dont want you to hear the same old story Me jealous of other peoples glory. I dont want to appear gutless And have you not know what to say but I dont want to see "did you hear that chick the other day" "She's so self obsessed And such a bore" I want to see things all good not feel pain anymore. Maybe I should take to chance to say thankyou For making some feelings true. Maybe I should admire you and reply I wont need to question myself or ask why!! *I wrote this for everyone at passions..(in a silly kinda way)...I just wanted to let you guys know I am sorry I havent been here in awhile but I have been thinking about all of you* [This message has been edited by Beth (edited 09-02-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Beth what a well written poem, take care of yourself always.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Why thank you my dear. I hope your absence has been for good reasons and everything is fine with you. Lovely poem and full of heart.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Beth. . . It's good to see you get some of those feelings out. . . We'll leave the light on for you. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Beth, wonderfully written poem, poetry is a beautiful thing and keep expressing yourself through words. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
How sweet you are for the thank you. Your poem is warming and kind So, thank you! Liz |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Marsha, Thankyou so much for your reply~ ~Mark, My reasons have been good but I am so much better now...And Im back for good hopefully...hahaha..thankyou kindly~ ~Sven, Thankyou deeply...Your reply means alot to me...Hey could you switch the light off sometimes...I do need my beauty sleep...LOL...~ ~Brian, Finding the emotions is the easy part...It's opening and letting them out...I guess I'll get there...Thankyou so very much~ ~Liz, I am so very happy that you liked this..It means a great deal to me..Thankyou again~ Thanks again to everyone!! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
I missed your poetry Ree...im happy you are back!  ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dawn, Thankyou so much for your reply..Im happy to be back and hopefully I can start writting well again~ |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Hiya Beth! Welcome back. Saved you a seat! Nice writing, by the way! But that's a given... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hello Beth, haven't come across your work before, but it sounds like you belong here. Welcome back and I look forward to reading more from you. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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