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Let's Find Forever |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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well I went to bed thinking of you turn out the lights put my pillow over my head it seems the only thing I can do to keep my self from thinking of you and I go crazy about to lose my mind tell me baby do you think? you could be mine? I've got to know will you find the time? and this thing it haunts me at night.... thoughts of you becoming so hard to fight... now I see you do you see me? and if I asked you would you tell me? how it feels to know i undress you with my eyes and if you got lonely in the night? would call on me? have you got just a little time for me? i want to see you under the stars take me in the moonlight no where to go tonight tell me what your doing after closing time i was thinking maybe i could make you mine not forever forever is yesterday today tomorrow never ending or as long as you make it forever could be a moment a second a hour so lets find what forever means to us tonight.... < !signature--> Julie  [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Hey Julie It's such an amazing poem you wrote here... It is kinda like something I wrote just couple of days ago and posted in Dark Passions... Will I have you? Don't dare saying never Maybe not this time But we have forever. Not in this life? Could be, however We will be back Wherever, whenever... Through the eternity For worse and for better, Floating through time As light as a feather. Life after life 'Till closer than ever For you to be mine I'll be waiting forever. Just don't go without me I will endeavour All, if you promiss We're leaving together... [This message has been edited by LM (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Let me know if putting that pillow on your head works...I'm ready for one now!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi JulieAnn.... Make that 2 pillows!!! Great writing !!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If the pillow don't work try using a cowboy hat. Lovely verse of longing in your soul. Loved the read. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
LM~~Thank you..I am glad you liked it....yours is good too...I never leave open nine so I have never read anyhting anywhere else....but thank you for your reply... Poet devine~~~that pillow...well it just sortof gets in the way...but it keeps me busy trying to breathe so I guess it gets my attention directed elsewhere.... Sunny~~~ 2...?? Yeah I will have to try that next time....but I was sort of hoping the other pillow would be being used....  Mark....I am blessed to have you reading and replying so much lately....a cowboy hat might just do the trick...or even the cowboy himself...LOL ...but I don't have one...can I borrow yours??I promise to return it if it doesn't work.... < !signature-->Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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