Open Poetry #9 |
Shallot |
tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
In his hand, the quill held tight As its blood dripped to the page With squinted eyes in dim lit light Came his midnight serenade A tale of love, unfortunate loss With all its bitter sweet strife As true love bloomed In a harvest moon And ended by the knife Passion poured from every line Each verse burned to your soul No other could have told the tale His words were magical And as the sun caressed that day While the moon in idle, slept He took his pages in his hands And as he read: he wept One last line before he closed Some say, his finest verse Unto dreams it is I waken Fair love lay at my cot In desperate screams I come to fate: of all that I have not A line, which the author wrote For his departed love~ Shallot © tori 2000 If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is beautiful. Loaded with inspiration I so desperately need. Thank you for posting this. Kathleen |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
Thank you Kathleen! I'm glad you got inspriation from it If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Tori I'm awed! Girl where did this one from come? LOL |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
picking up Josh from school yesterday...lol the first stanza hit me and it grew from there... I am getting a voice recorder to keep in my car... I've got crs... I need it for the bright one's that slip away )hehehe Thanks Dove~ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Wow, this is just so GREAT!!! So inspiring! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
What a tale!! Truly inspired. . . the words just leap from the page. . . Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tori Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 520Mechanicsville, Maryland, USA |
thank you LM~ and Sven~ If with pen in hand I've made you think I've not wasted one drop of ink Vlh. visit my site~ http://www.hsanet.net/user/dkm/hellomy.htm |
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