»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #9
»
Senyrus for a New Love
| Open Poetry #9 |
|
Senyrus for a New Love |
|
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
|
First touch Anticipation pounding in my chest deeply first touch of your heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thoughts of you butterfly panging swirling in dances of love with each thought of you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Palms palms laced within sweat mixtures of trembles set in as we meet again Mark Bohannan [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-02-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Mark Bohannan - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You described it so perfectly and masterfully. But that's exactly how it is This is so lovely Liz |
||
|
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...perfection attained... ...great work Mark...  Thinking of new love Causes teenage days to blush Cheek to cheek, in dance regards sudhir |
||
|
Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Mark* Beautiful work my friend...so much said in so few words.....these still evade me but that only increases the beauty of these~ |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Hey Mark! You certainly got these down to perfection! You said it so very well!! Excellent! |
||
|
sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Exquisite images of new love you have painted here with a colorful brush. Truly visionary.  Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
||
|
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
You are SUCH a POET....ok ok no name calling..  LOL.....well this is just absolutely perfect.....who is taking lessons from the masters??? < !signature-->Julie [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 09-01-2000).] |
||
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, "...butterfly panging swirling in dances of love with each thought of you..." I love this stanza I'm soo glad I stopped in before signing off. rp25 |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--You do know how to describe that crazy feeling. Well done sweet cowboy! |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark! Anticipation of muse, music and magic coming from your touch  Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
||
|
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Very special words for a special lady, she is lucky my friend........ |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Liz-the perfection in love is not allowing the temptation of perfection at all. Never look beyond the golden heart for a better treasure. Thank you my friend. Sudhir-Thank you so much kind sir...I had a senyru response for you started then my baby flashed in my mind and all of a sudden it was no longer yours.LOL..sorry But you do know that I appreciate your friendship. Thank you. Holly- I could never see ANYTHING of beauty evading YOU!!!! Thank you my sweet friend. You know that I know and I HAVE SEEN YOUR BEAUTY in your words and heart. WhtDove-thank you so much and I do so like to see you visit. sonjes-Yes A new love but only of this lifetime. Thank you much. Julie-I could have sworn it was you in that room when they laughed me out of there. Thank you much. You are a dear and if you are going to call me names like that then please stick around. rp25-I thank you for stopping by and I like it when you point out the one you like. Martie- I am trying to, but sometimes there are just not enough words. Care to pass a few of yours this way? Thank you my friend. Karilea- Why thank you for that magical moment. and your always kind replies to me.Michael G-As I have stated before...I feel it is I that is the lucky one and blessed on top of that. Thank you so much. |
||
|
Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
This is perfectly beautiful, I'm giving this a standing ovation. Truly a master craftsman. |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You made me think about meeting someone new and after you part you find yourself thinking about them so much and eagerly anticipating the next time you will be with them so you can just touch them again...James |
||
|
juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh my dear friend I stand in awe of these pieces of perfection. Such beauty, such tenderness. So well done, so very well done. Hugs, Juls [This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 09-01-2000).] |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow Mark, you certainly have the talent for these. Perfectly said with flair. I especially loved the first two, what a description! You must be in love! Take care, Melissa honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
||
|
Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Beautiful, simply just beautiful...... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beverly-A standing "O"...wow thank you so much....I guess it does pay to write from the heart. James-You pretty much nailed on it dead on sir. I am glad you were able to get from them what was really within them....I am patiently waiting that next touch. Juls-You may sit down if you like. No need to stand!!!!! Thank you so much my sweet friend. Melissa-why thank you so much. I have missed seeing you around. Twas a nice surprise to see your name here. I am glad you had some favorites...always like to know what pleases my sweet friends. |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marina-You snuck in on me. Where were you peeking from?lol...Thanks kiddo. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
love touches his heart and stirs both his soul and pen blessing us with rhyme Great verses Mark |
||
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, this is quite beautiful and simple, yet profound. catalinamoon |
||
|
Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sorry I havent been here to reply..Im glad I came back in time to catch this one...Good work Mark...You talent amazes me and brightens my day imensley....Stay cool.. Beth~ |
||
|
Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
fate and destiny written in the stars above simply meant to be ********* senyru...from me to you me |
||
|
Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Mark, A succinct form that still eludes me. I salute you in your ability to create such strong emotions and visions with so few words. Simply beautiful! Trev. |
||
|
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Honey-colored thoughts Drip sweet nectar all around Attracting poet swoon *Swooning* here ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
||
|
Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
hoot_owl_rn-Thank you so much for the lovely response...I cherish those the most. catalinamoon-Profound? why I thank deeply my dear. Beth-so nice to see your smile again and I am happy to have brightened your day. JM- my sweet poetic friend...I shall cherish the senyru as much as I do you. Hugs to you. Trew-Thank you so much and I bet you can do it no prob. Just give it a whirl...5-7-5 no easier thing to do.(ask Marge) Marge-I was just talking about you...all good of course. You sure do know what BAIT to use to catch a poet don't ya....how did you know I was hungry for some of your honey....(you know...the homemade kind.) IN A JAR ok???....jeeeezzzzz try to thank someone and look where their mind(or maybe it is mine) goes.LOL [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-02-2000).] |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
