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Open Poetry #9

Feelings into words

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

0 posted 2000-09-01 09:39 AM

Hello everyone! Here's my first post here at Open:

Feelings into words

If I could put into words
The sweet sensation of love...
Flow of emotions from head to toes,
Spirit soaring high above.

If I could put it into words
Increasing beat of heart
Strings of soul produce the chords
No musician could have had.

If I could put it into words
The warmth that is inside
And the urge to smile while thinking of you
Or pretending you hold me tight.

If I could put it into words
How much it brings me peace
To drown into this sea of thoughts,
I'd write a master-piece...

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-09-01 10:13 AM

What took you so long! Welcome! I can see that I, for one, am going to enjoy your visits!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

2 posted 2000-09-01 11:05 AM

Thanks a lot for the lovely welcome, Sunshine

Peace!

sonjes
Senior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 564
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-09-01 11:10 AM

I see the words haven't evaded you, LM. Very sweet and fanciful verse you have produced.

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

4 posted 2000-09-01 01:31 PM

Thanks a lot sonjes

Very sweet of you!

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

5 posted 2000-09-01 08:54 PM

Hey LM - You certainly put your feelings into words well, this is terrific. Look forward to seeing more. Bonnie

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2000-09-01 10:25 PM

Hi, nice to see you here also. I know just the feeling, and you put it into words very nicely.
catalinamoon

LM
Senior Member

since 2000-08-03

Posts 585

7 posted 2000-09-02 04:56 AM

Thanks Bonnie and Catalina

Catalina, it's nice to hear your replies here as well

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