Open Poetry #9 |
Not Forgotten |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
How deeply you have touched my soul, and stirred forgotten flames.. These old forgotten feelings with their long-forgotten names.. Could it be my memory is trying to recall, the carefree days of youth, they're not forgotten after all? When I read your letters, I'm reminded by my heart... How much it means to get them, and sometimes a teardrop starts.. Well...here I sit, ashamed of it, but never knowing why.. How could I have forgotten how my happy heart can cry? Even though you're new to me, and you don't know me well... I want to be a part of you..but time and truth will tell... And if our hearts are meant to share a not-forgotten dream... Our thoughts and love will grow into a not-forgotten team! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sigh...so very beautiful |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Sunny, You write from the heart and your words do touch me. Very nice Sunny, with words of very much meaning. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunny, < !signature-->Well this one is perfect, awesome actually, and I really love these words, Even though you're new to me, and you don't know me well... I want to be a part of you..but time and truth will tell... And if our hearts are meant to share a not-forgotten dream... Our thoughts and love will grow into a not-forgotten team! Beautiful Sunny. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful memories Sunny. Must be the air up in Alaska helping to cleanse the soul. Lovely verse. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny wow, that's so beautiful. How special are your words, they are perfection. True beauty, comes from the soul, and your soul is written here. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny--old memories cherished as new ones grow...lovely thoughts and writing! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Simply divine words of memories and hope...Lovely, beautiful...very touching!! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
wonderful poem... hope is a wonderful thing. I enjoyed this poem very much. "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Old memories should always be cherisehed. This is so filled with hope.........I think I should come and breath some of that fresh air!...........Beautiful words..... Jenn E |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
These old forgotten feelings with their long-forgotten names.... I love this line. I love the whole thing. Beautifully written. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Paula... I hope that is a sigh of contentment!! Thank you, girl!! Hello Bill... My whole heart went into this and I really am glad you came by to read and enjoy......... Hi Cerenity... Perfection is only realized in the eyes of good friends!! Thank you, my friend!! Hello Mark... Deep breathing helps, too!! Thankyou for sharing my thoughts! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marsha... Oh, that was sweet of you to say! I'm just glad to see you here, and I thank you! Hi Martie... Old and new combine here, it's true......thank you so much!! Hi sonjes... Hope is one of my favorite words. It's what keeps the human race going!! Thanks! Hi Dawn Eclipse... If we don't have hope, what good is anything? Thank you for droppin in and reading!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Jenn E... Well, we do have plenty of fresh air here, so far!! Thank you for your nice reply, and it's good to see you here....... Hello Enigma.... Thank you so much...I wrote this for someone special to make them smile. I'm glad that you liked it!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Sunny ~ definitely a great way to start a new relationship, a beautiful poem, then all your are that, beautiful... Steve B |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Steve... Thank you for stopping by and I'm really glad that you liked my poem!! I always appreciate such kind replies!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful write on this one...enjoyable to read....James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello James... Good to see you, and I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. This one is special to me! Thank you, my friend...... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, another beautiful rendition of your heart. So much hope, and how wonderful it is. Take care. Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi catalinamoon!! Good to see you here, and I thank you for your reply!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi SUNNY, just breezing thru and wanna say you got me sighing on this one you've penned! Coco |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Coco!! You can breeze through any ol' time!! And a few sighs are good for the soul!! Thank you, my friend...... (I love the way your name sounds!!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~As you already know Im a big fan of yours...I love your style and the way you are so open...This one just proves you ooze talent.. Beth~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Beth.....you are also a special talent in your own right!!!! Everyone here at Passions is unique, and I am so very glad to have the chance to get to know writers and friends like you.....I mean that!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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