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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England

0 posted 2000-08-31 03:37 AM



        How deeply you have touched my soul,
            and stirred forgotten flames..
      These old forgotten feelings with their
               long-forgotten names..
      Could it be my memory is trying to recall,
        the carefree days of youth, they're
              not forgotten after all?


       When I read your letters, I'm reminded
                  by my heart...
         How much it means to get them, and
             sometimes a teardrop starts..
       Well...here I sit, ashamed of it, but
                never knowing why..
      How could I have forgotten how my happy
                   heart can cry?


       Even though you're new to me, and you
               don't know me well...
      I want to be a part of you..but time and
                 truth will tell...
       And if our hearts are meant to share a
               not-forgotten dream...
       Our thoughts and love will grow into a
                not-forgotten team!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



© Copyright 2000 Sunnyone - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-08-31 04:13 AM


Sigh...so very beautiful
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-08-31 06:36 AM


Good morning Sunny,
You write from the heart and your words do touch me. Very nice Sunny, with words of very much meaning.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-08-31 09:41 AM


Hi Sunny,

Well this one is perfect, awesome actually,
and I really love these words,

Even though you're new to me, and you
               don't know me well...
  I want to be a part of you..but time and
                 truth will tell...
  And if our hearts are meant to share a
               not-forgotten dream...
       Our thoughts and love will grow into a  not-forgotten team!

Beautiful Sunny.

Love, Cerenity
< !signature-->

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



[This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 08-31-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
4 posted 2000-08-31 09:57 AM


Very beautiful memories Sunny.  Must be the air up in Alaska helping to cleanse the soul.   Lovely verse.
Marsha
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since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
5 posted 2000-08-31 10:01 AM


Sunny wow, that's so beautiful. How special are your words, they are perfection. True beauty, comes from the soul, and your soul is written here.  
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
6 posted 2000-08-31 10:22 AM


Sunny--old memories cherished as new ones grow...lovely thoughts and writing!
sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-08-31 11:41 AM


Simply divine words of memories and hope...Lovely, beautiful...very touching!!

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula
8 posted 2000-08-31 11:58 AM


wonderful poem... hope is a wonderful thing.  I enjoyed this poem very much.  

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*


Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
9 posted 2000-08-31 12:01 PM


Old memories should always be cherisehed. This is so filled with hope.........I think I should come and breath some of that fresh air!...........Beautiful words.....  
Jenn E

~Enigma~
Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44
St Cloud, MN
10 posted 2000-08-31 12:08 PM


These old forgotten feelings with their
               long-forgotten names....

I love this line.  I love the whole thing.  Beautifully written.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
11 posted 2000-08-31 12:50 PM


Hello Paula...
             I hope that is a sigh of contentment!!   Thank you, girl!!


Hello Bill...
             My whole heart went into this
             and I really am glad you came
             by to read and enjoy.........


Hi Cerenity...
             Perfection is only realized in
             the eyes of good friends!!
             Thank you, my friend!!


Hello Mark...
             Deep breathing helps, too!!
             Thankyou for sharing my
                     thoughts!




Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
12 posted 2000-08-31 12:57 PM


Hi Marsha...
            Oh, that was sweet of you to say!
            I'm just glad to see you here,
            and I thank you!


Hi Martie...
            Old and new combine here, it's
            true......thank you so much!!


Hi sonjes...
            Hope is one of my favorite
            words.  It's what keeps the
            human race going!!  Thanks!


Hi Dawn Eclipse...
                 If we don't have hope,
                 what good is anything?
                 Thank you for droppin
                 in and reading!!




Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
13 posted 2000-08-31 01:02 PM


Hi Jenn E...
           Well, we do have plenty of fresh
           air here, so far!! Thank you for
           your nice reply, and it's good to
           see you here.......


Hello Enigma....
               Thank you so much...I wrote
               this for someone special to
               make them smile.  I'm glad
               that you liked it!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Steve B
Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140
Southern PA
14 posted 2000-09-01 05:33 PM


Sunny ~ definitely a great way to start a new
relationship, a beautiful poem, then all your are  that, beautiful... Steve B  

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
15 posted 2000-09-01 06:02 PM



Hi Steve...
            Thank you for stopping by and I'm really glad that you liked my poem!! I always appreciate such kind replies!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
16 posted 2000-09-01 06:04 PM


Wonderful write on this one...enjoyable to read....James
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
17 posted 2000-09-01 06:22 PM


Hello James...

       Good to see you, and I'm glad you enjoyed this poem.  This one is special to me!    Thank you, my friend......


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
18 posted 2000-09-01 10:40 PM


Sunny, another beautiful rendition of your heart. So much hope, and how wonderful it is.
Take care.
Sandra

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
19 posted 2000-09-02 01:35 AM


Hi catalinamoon!!
                 Good to see you here, and I thank you for your reply!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



CocoBaci
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

20 posted 2000-09-02 01:44 AM


hi SUNNY, just breezing thru and wanna say you got me sighing on this one you've penned!

Coco  

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
21 posted 2000-09-02 01:52 AM



Hi Coco!!
           You can breeze through any ol' time!!  And a few sighs are good for the soul!!    Thank you, my friend......
       (I love the way your name sounds!!)


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



Beth
Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468
WA, Australia
22 posted 2000-09-02 02:02 AM


~As you already know Im a big fan of yours...I love your style and the way you are so open...This one just proves you ooze talent..
Beth~

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
23 posted 2000-09-02 02:07 AM



  Thank you, Beth.....you are also a special talent in your own right!!!! Everyone here at Passions is unique, and I am so very glad to have the chance to get to know writers and friends like you.....I mean that!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



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