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Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-01 09:27 AM


Natural Beauty

O'er field of flowered offerings
Young wren of morning sings
Great height
Through cloudy mist sun's filterings
Showcasing sheen on bravened wings
In flight
To sway of willow limbs joy clings
Melodious gift 'round meadow rings.

Birdsong extols; awed utterings
From freshness-filled breast brings
Such might
A natural beauty on cloud-silk strings
She compliments most finer minglings
So bright
Young wren of morning sings
O'er field of flowered offerings



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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
1 posted 2000-09-01 09:33 AM


Ah, beautiful... very much so...

great writing...

regards,
sudhir

Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-09-01 10:15 AM


....and so is your response...beautiful.
Thank you very much, Sudhir.


~soft nod~...chanson~
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"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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3 posted 2000-09-01 10:31 AM


You've painted quite the picture of Natural Beauty! Very well done!

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Chanson
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-09-01 11:34 AM


WhtDove...thank you. It's always a pleasure to hear from you  ...chanson~

"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-09-01 02:48 PM


AHhhh yesssss.....tis the natural beauty indeed.  Mind sending that wren to my window for tomorrow morn....as of late I have only blackbirds squaking at my window.  Beautiful write.  So peaceful and brings a smile.
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
6 posted 2000-09-01 03:09 PM


I don't mind at all.
I hope the little wren is at
your window by tomorrow morning  ...chanson~



"Music, when soft voices die,
Vibrates in the memory..."
P.B. Shelley


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