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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh Sweet love, touch me yes smother me with your sweet caress I feel your breath upon my face I feel your lips, I long to taste Ease your way down my softness tasting, exploring, ever wanting Sweet love is, all for you Familiar sounds, you feel it to Kiss my lips, never part ease your way, meld our hearts Darkness gone, souls at bay This memory will forever stay |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jenn~ Warm welcome to you  This is a very beautiful piece and one that I enjoyed alot Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oh yes...like this one... mmm mmm mmm... some things just get under our skin.. and indeed forever stay lovely sensual writing jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennE~ This is a lovely piece. The title is almost a poem in itself. Welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oh..this is certainly very nice.....sweet and sensual! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tender, sensuous, and so lovely to read. Well done and the Title is perfect. |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
Ooh- I like this piece. You have a romantic way of capturing love making...you follow it moment by moment and it closes so nicely with the title of the poem. Welcome-and keep submitting! "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I would like to say Thank You to everyone for making me feel welcome. I hope to write more and read more from all of you! Thank you Jenn E |
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T McCoy Member
since 2000-07-24
Posts 186 |
must say i'm glad you've got those feelings... i liked this piece and i'll be sure to read more...welcome to passions! Tony |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome! This is a very sensual well crafted piece of work. I will be looking for more. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Welcome to passions and thank you for the kind reply to my post....I like your thinking a lot....a little intensity is sometimes a good thing... tell them like it is!!!  Julie :) |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I wonder what may come..... such a good entrance....... welcome.... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a very sensual piece, really liked this one. Hot stuff. "I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone" manic street preachers |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sensual, Tender....wow Jenn This is Awesome work!! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Jenn, very sensual. Excellent writing. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I am just grateful that you all enjoyed this.....Thanks you all again for making me feel so welcome. Brian , LOL on the "hot stuff"......... |
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