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Dance of the Gypsy Queen
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Dance of the Gypsy Queen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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As she twirls by the light of the fire, You can see in her eyes the desire... When the fast music plays, How she gracefully sways... But something is missing tonight... If you look at her face you can see where Her teardrops will never be free there... She's too strong to cry, But her heart begs to try, It's a feeling that she just can't fight... So she dances to make herself weary, Dancing faster, her fears all get bleary... There are changes at hand, That she can't understand, And she knows they are coming too soon... While she dances, her mind is recalling, All her past loves, some good, some appalling But the one meant to be, Is the same one that she, Dreams of holding beneath the full moon... And tonight, as the sun's slowly sinking, As she dances, alone, she is thinking... She's decided to say, In her own special way, That she wants him for her Gypsy King... They will dance by the fire forever... With their hearts beating so, stopping never, When the King takes his Queen, To a Gypsy it means, That the dancing has only begun... They will dance to the music that's playing, In their hearts, as their bodies are swaying, Gypsy King with his Queen, And the magic they bring, To the Dance, Gypsy, Dance....... Love is Young! < !signature--> Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-01-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ I am captivated by the stories of Gypsies. Well done, indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Marge! Now you know a real one, and I shall tell you as many stories as you like!! (As long as I can read all of yours!!) Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Me too! I was totally engrossed in captivated merriment... WONDERFUL!!! regards, sudhir |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sudhir.... If nothing else, a gypsy will captivate you, and possibly more!! thank you for coming in to visit!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Sunny, I've always been fascinated by the stories of gypsies, so of course, your poetry holds a special interest for me. I enjoyed this immensely, my friend. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny--I can see it all in the firelight of your words...enjoyed! |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
What a great poem! It flows just like a song... I loved it! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Michael.... I thank you for your thoughts, and I will share my gypsy stories with you any time!! All we need is the campfire!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Martie.... Ahhhh....If you can see the magic then I know that you have the soul of the gypsy!! Only those that believe can see. Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
LM... I'm glad you liked this song, as that is what it is, I am sure! I'm a songwriter, and when I write poetry, the music is playing in my mind, behind the words. It can't be helped! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunny...a gypsy girl you are, and will ever be. Your poem is excellent and matchless. The words are exquisit, and your pen just flows. Dance Gypsy Queen, dance the night away! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a captivating poem! And what a dance it is! Not only is it magical because of the gypsies, but beautiful because of the love story as well. Truly a work of art here, Sunny!  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Mystical magical captivating dance. Think you rolled up enough feelings in this one?lol Very lovely read and yes I could see you dancing. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Bill... I'm in the mood for firelight and music!! Thank you for your beautiful thoughts, and yes.....I will always dance. Hello M.H.... Thank you, as well, and I am really glad that you enjoyed the story inside the poem!! Hello Mark.... yes, I think a lot of feeling went into this....but the gypsy heart is all feeling and emotion, and I can dance! Thank you..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, you know how I feel about this. I am a gypsy at heart as well, and seeking my King. Such a lyrical and captivating feeling to this poem. I know that has already been said, but even a poet can't always come up with original compliments. Happy dancing.Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, my good friend, don't worry about the words in a reply!! Just to know that you read it, and it gave you a smile, is all the words I need!!! Thank you!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
What a delight this was to delve into this wondeful world of gypsies!! Thank you for the enchanting read, Sunny. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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