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Enternal Sleep |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Enternal Sleep A weary shade of gray slumps upon my shoulder I turn to see his eyes dark and full of grief My heart seems to stop and takes a cigarette break for time is slipping deep into my desperate plea. A distant light shimmers laughing to see me here Voices swivel in spirals of immense lie & tears Perfection in the depths of me predicament will I step forward.... Mother, father, and family trying to hold me back this noose around my neck is getting tighter please let me fall, let me find her again and rest with her in eternal sleep. [This message has been edited by Daniel_vv (edited 09-03-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this is very sad, but i like the way it is written...hope all is well... ~Dawn "Steady as it comes, right down to you, I've said it all, so maybe we're a Bliss of another kind" Bliss-Tori Amos |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I liked the "Romeo and Juliet" theme in this. Kathleen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Good morning Daniel_vv, Yes, this is sad, but I pray that every thing is well. I'm glad that I stopped by. |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Thank-you to all. |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Very good Daniel.....and very sad!! |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Very good Daniel.....and very sad!! |
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