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Haunting
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Haunting |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Haunting I lay here in bed In the lonilness of night And I hear you voice Echoing through my mind A ghost of what was. I toss and turn and try to sleep The memory of your touch Trailing so light against my skin In those passion filled nights Floats in my misty thoughts A cold lonely chill softly Sweeps over me as I think of you And I wonder as my eyes sting And my heartbreak grows Will you ever stop haunting me? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I dont know that a lost love ever really quits haunting. Even if replaced with a better one and a stronger one we have a tendency to go back to the past in our minds at different points. Wonderful write my friend. Liked it much. |
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Daniel_vv Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 61 |
Lonliness is revenage of the soul, he who looses loves, gains lonliness. This was a beaurtiful poem. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25... This is 'hauntingly' beautiful, and I felt a chill as I read it through! Wonderful writing!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very well written... sad and beautiful that's composition that hits If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Once again you have stopped in and left the one of the nicest replies.  I'm happy that you liked it... and I agree.. past loves are always there in your heart.Daniel_w - Thank you for stopping to read. I'm glad you liked it Sunny - Thank you! I'm glad you stopped into read it.AVANTI - Thanks for the nice words... I think alot of people can definately connect with this poem. |
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