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Until Next Time
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Until Next Time |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma 
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Until Next Time Until next time When we meet again The nights will be lonely Hard for me to grin Until next time When our paths do cross I’ll be thinking of you Heart feeling this loss Until next time My world seems so cold Dreaming of your kiss So tender and slow Until next time Till I hear a knock at the door See your beautiful smile Have you once more I will sit patiently Fingers crossed, focused mind Wishing you were here with me Until next time A Dream is a Wish the Heart Makes... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Missing and longing for someone is so hard. You've portrayed that well in this poem. I hope that your longing for this person is a short one. Good-luck and hope to see more of your poems!  kat |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
What a delicate, sensual yearning this poem evokes...beautiful feelings, so lovingly set to verse. I enjoyed reading your poem. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MysticalNights~ A soft and lovely render. Tenderly portrayed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
So very sweet and tender this is. This "longing" is so hard....I hope your wait is short for hapiness to shine on you. Take Care. Jenn E |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi, just snuck in here and had a peek and sure am glad after this read... I really enjoyed the flow of this poem and how you've captured the feeling of yearning so tenderly... Coco |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
This was written because someone I truly enjoy spending time with, whom with different circumstances now, I will not be able to as much as I'd like for a while. I too hope that "the next time" comes soon. Thank you all for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. MysticalNights |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
MN~ This is absolutely fantastic........very romantic in my book.....*sigh*....... -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Ah...the waiting is so hard sometimes...nothing like that rush when you see them the next time. Wonderful write, MN.< !signature--> Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma [This message has been edited by sonjes (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
ahhh...the sweet agony of longing. You capture it beautifully. |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
SEA- Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed it. sonjes- Ahh yes. The rush.. Can't wait to experience it once more. Enigma- Thank you for your reply. Glad you liked it. MysticalNights |
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