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Loneliness (repost from #2) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Traffic sounds, a whisper in the trees I realize that these are sounds of my loneliness tears crashing upon my hands heart tightened with restricting bands signs of my loneliness a soft sigh sounds so loud in the middle of a noisy crowd need feeds my loneliness wondering in my mind if love is truly blind distance increases my loneliness |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have penned a beautiful piece describing the thundering pain of lonliness in this. Yes even in the quietest moments of lonliness the noise in our brains and our souls can be overpowering. |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Poet deVine, Yes, loneliness is a painful thing, similar in some respects to heartbreak. I wish you all the best, my friend. Take care, Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poet deVine, Nobody knows how lonely you are. I think they wrote a song about that. Beautiful poem. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Miss Poet deVine, Such a sad poem, to me you are such a main figure in this place of passions I might have taken for grant you are human and so very, very special a soul to me, and if this is not how you feel just posted it, I still mean what I said you Miss Poet deVine would be sorely missed even without your responciabiltys here and I think everyone would agree but personal companionship is one of grate need to and I hope for you the best. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
A feeling I know too well, spoken as it truely is  "Those who will not learn to use this instrument well cannot be saved by an expanded alphabet; they will only afflict us with expanded gibberish" ~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
The sounds of silence deVine. . . Excellent poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Loneliness is the most terrible poverty. I think Mother Teresa said that. Well said Ms. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you so much for reposting this one... great writing... regards O Poet deVine, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Poet De Vine. and lonely silence shatters the peace whan wafted on an errant breeze. Brilliant work, love it. Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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