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HopelessRomantic
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since 2000-08-31
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0 posted 2000-08-31 11:19 AM


My undying love for my girl.. now my ex. for some reason sparked my artistic side. here's a song about how I felt in August 99' ah the memories...

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Verse 1

Another day has gone by without you,
But never ever will i forget about you,
Reading the letters you sent to me,
I shed a tear or joy, knowing your love for me,
I'm so lucky to have a love as sweet as you,
Even though you're away my love stays true,
I wish I could just hear your voice,
With your eyes staring straight into mine,

Chorus

Even if you're living on the other side,
My love for you will never die,
No distance in the world could take away.
My undying love for you....
Every night when I go to sleep,
I dream about you here with me,
You're the one that makes my life complete,
My baby, I love you...
I will always comfort you, protect, and share my heart with you,
If i had just one wish, I would hold you tight,
I always want to be the one by your side,
Everytime I look up to the sky and think of you,
I start to cry,
Hoping that, you are thinking of me too...
My sweetheart.. I love you.

Verse 2

I don't care what my friends may say,
They keep telling me to turn and walk away,
They don't understand the way I feel,
That my love for you is real
I will wait for you until the end of time,
Time means nothing to me if i know you're mine,
My love stretches out to the farthest stars,
I don't care how far you are...
You will always be close in my heart..

Repeat Chorus

Verse 3

I am waiting so patiently,
When the time comes to be, finally again we meet,
I will never stop loving you, In my heart you know it's true,
Turn your head and close your eyes, if you don't want to see me cry,
you never have to worry about being blue,
because my baby, I will always love you,
A millions words can never explain to you,
How strong my heart is for you,
You will always be my dream come true,
My darling, I will always love you....

Repeat Chorus

-fin-

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with you
1 posted 2000-08-31 11:24 AM


HR~ hopefully you won't have to wait a long time.....I hope it works out for you!   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB


Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
2 posted 2000-08-31 12:26 PM


SING BOY SING..............I am sure you sound better then I. As for your "inspiration" she is very lucky. I really beleive that PAST loves teach us soo much and we learn from all who have touched our lives. If it is not her  you were ment to be with she has brought beautiful sides of you to the surface that will not go un noticed by some lucky lady who will one day warm your heart.  
Jenn E

HopelessRomantic
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since 2000-08-31
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3 posted 2000-08-31 08:29 PM


glad you liked the song..   I just stumbled on some words when i was playing my guitar and thinking of her -=)
linda munday
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since 2000-06-17
Posts 315
Adelaide, Australia
4 posted 2000-08-31 08:42 PM


Hopeless Romantic,

A beautiful song, I wonder if I got the tune right as I tried to sing it  

Lovely words, and if that's a sample of your romantic heart, then someone's going to be very lucky.

Take Care,
Linda Munday

sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
5 posted 2000-09-01 07:08 AM


I finally got here...sorry it took so long. I do like this...  
  Your words of love are so prominently displayed in this one...the reader can see everything that you are feeling. Definitely a heart-wrenching song with a sweetness to it as well.

Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma


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