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Love Unconfined
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Love Unconfined |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Love Unconfined Drowning in a living sea of waking dreams. I fight off the iniquities that fate so deems. I go to her with my love unconfined and true. Her beauty shimmers like translucent dew. I yearn so to be tangled in her silken hair. To be fettered to her eyes, sparkling there. To spend eterne captive in my loves embrace, But circumstance and distance denies us this place. Forlorn, dejected, despirited, I bide this time of ordeal, Anguishing over the hope of ever having my loves touch to heal. Steve B |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
though the miles be far apart I know you'll find the start to one mile at a time. beautiful poem Steve |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"I yearn so to be tangled in her silken hair." Steve, this line, in particular, moved me. The yearning here is quite clear. You've chosen your title well for this piece, I believe. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SteveB~ Some very thoughtfully longing ideas here. 'To be fettered to her eyes, sparkling there.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very strong, yearning poem here. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Rose ~ Claire ~ Marge ~ Kethry ~ Thank you all once again, perhaps it is not so much that I write well, as it is that what I write is real.. sighhhhhh thank you all for your kind words  Steve B |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
this is lovely and sad all at the same time...a very strong read, and yet your tenderness just shines through |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Paula ~ your tender replies are always welcome and appreciated much,, thank you.. Steve B |
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