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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-02 12:49 PM




Of My Design...

I sometimes watch the clouds in sky
_And push away the misted gray,
With softened breath expressing sigh
_Knowing of the new, this day.
Would love to float, as if a leaf
_And twirl and dance a show for you.
But it is not in my belief,
_That this will stop the storming's dew.
Those reigns will come in drippings large
_And myst my body, droplets felled.
Electrifying, a thunder charge
_With look in eyes, I have been "spelled".
Wondering too, just what you feel
_When soaking up the moisture, mine.
Are you consumed with what is real
_And are you thinking, of my design...

When you're within my range of touch
_And eyes of mine seek eyes of blue,
A hesitation, a skip of beat,
_Silent looks, soft moments of you
To comfort me in dark of night.
_I'm flooded with the feelings of
Your breath upon my slender neck,
_The captured scent," vanilla love".
You taste my lips, and blend the sweet
_And enter me, my heart and soul.
Emotions yearn for tenderness,
_Reflecting wants, your mind's control.
As days turn into sharing nights
_And shadows steal the visions clear,
I feel the warmth of softness when
_The moments bring us nestled here.

When morning calls and dreams have gone,
_And loving thoughts leave residues
Awakening to golden dawn
_Chamber wrapped in loving hues,
The reds of passion, satin sighs
_ The blues of heavens' dreamtime flights
The greens of hazel shaded eyes
_Seeking you in golden lights.
Imaged then, once fantasy
_Staged in front, now real, in flesh,
To taste of pleasures, mystery
_Celestial love, the moons to mesh.
Wondering now, just what you feel
_When desires meet, both yours and mine.
Are you consumed with what is real
_And are you thinking, of my design...

MM
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[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-02-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-02 07:45 AM


Maureen~
A soft read, indeed.
~*Marge*~


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Sudhir Iyer
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2 posted 2000-08-02 09:48 AM


When morning calls and dreams have gone,
_And loving thoughts leave residues
Awakening to golden dawn
_Chamber wrapped in loving hues,
The reds of passion, satin sighs
_ The blues of heavens' dreamtime flights
The greens of hazel shaded eyes
_Seeking you in golden lights.

...

Wonderful work, Maureen...

Regards,
sudhir

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-02 01:13 PM


Marge and Sudhir thanks for the "soft" words and "wonderful work"...I was feeling this yesterday..somedays  I have it..and well some days, not
~~soft smiles
Maureen

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-02-2000).]

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2000-08-02 08:39 PM


beautiful..I love your use of imagery...  
MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-03 12:34 PM


thank you PdV...I am  happy you enjoyed
~~softly
Maureen

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6 posted 2004-05-02 07:33 PM


I love this style of you
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