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Feeling Fall |
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SEA 
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Can you feel Fall coming the crispness in the air Autumn is around the corner soon the trees will be bare It's time for cozy weather add a blanket to the bed soon I'll be making home made stews and bread Light a fire, then come snuggle up with me when it's raining this is where I want to be Yes, I can feel Fall coming storm clouds are in my sight Autumn is around the corner much to my delight! -SEA- * I've been so busy and my muse has been playing hookey.....the stormy weather got her back today!  *Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi SEA..... This one is great~!! I love Fall, think it's my fav time of the year because of all the colors! Looks like your muse is going well and strong!! Welcome back! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And what a beautiful day for her to come back on. I love the autumn time and the haunting reflections it brings to us as we start to get in that certain mood for the season. Superb writing...truley superb |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
On this 3rd day in a row of 110 degree temps I believe miss Fall is nowhere in sight! If you see her, tell her to get her butt over here!! Wonderful piece!!< !signature-->-jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com [This message has been edited by ladysixstring (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Fall is such a beautiful time of year. Beautifully expressed. I can't wait for the trees to turn to those beautiful autumn colors. (I have awhile to wait I'm afraid as it is probably 100 here in Houston, TX. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Save me a place at the table for the stew and homemade bread! This is great SEA. Starting to feel the cool weather here in Wyoming. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Sunny1~Me too! I love the colors, the smells,and the weather....thank you Mark~yes, it's cold and cloudy here today, I love it, thank you Lady~I'll try to hurry her on her way to see you! Susan~ sorry for the heat you are going through in Texas( I love Texas btw) I hope you get some cooler weather soon! Eloise~ It's yummy! I make a great garlic loaf too! I bet it's beautiful in Wyoming. -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Susan - May I add a verse or two to your lovely poem? *innocent eyes* And when the Autumn winds blow in And strip the leaves away, I'll be able to see the stranded cats, I chased up there in May. heh heh - I couldn't help it - it must be my "Kitty-kicking" time of month again. Your poem (on the other hand) was very sweet, and made me think of my Lorelei. Thank you. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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LngJhnAg~ Ahhh! Too funny! That's perfect.... I'm glad you liked it -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Ahhhhhh ! Make mine Spring right after the Fall ... could we just skip Winter forever ? Lovely thoughts, luv. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I want to snuggle! Such a beautiful poem SEA I love the Fall….. And winter…. Can't forget spring! ………….! Now how could I leave out summer!! The beach, the sand, the biki…..Oops! I mean because Fall comes next! Loved your poem! |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh perfect timing SEA! What a lovely poem to get me out of the doldrums ... I heard we're going to get frost up here in Ontario tonight ... yikes ... how did that sneak in so quickly? Your wonderful poem helped to remind me "why" I don't mind ... thank you SEA ... very nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, I can feel it! Great poem! Denise |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I lived in Panama City for 3 months "once upon a time" about 9 years ago and it was at the end of the year, I think Spring time there would have been very nice, but I sure enjoyed Bingo at the Bingo Palace! Insect~ You got it!  Kit~ Thank you, I love the Fall...my favorite time of year, so many wonderful things, so many great memories...ahhhh. Denise~ Thanks! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sea~ I love this, it is so beautiful Excellent writings. Autumn is such a lovely time of year I must agree but I'm still glad it's finally spring here in Oz. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ thanks sweetie I bet it's beautiful there! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SEA, This is amazing and beautiful.... great, great work.... regards, sudhir |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir~ that is so nice, thanks! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Fall is felt and reminds me to appreciate it more through your poem. Thanks |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a wonderful poem SEA. Fall is my favorite season, and you described why just perfectly. Bonnie |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi SEA, I just loved this one... It's soooo sweet... Got me all hyped to play in a mound of leaves... Okay well, I'll rake em up too... Coco |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I miss SEA. And I miss her poetry. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I miss SEA too ... love her poetry and her personality. Hoping that there will be a come-back soon! Margherita |
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