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When I Say Goodbye
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When I Say Goodbye |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Don't want to say goodbye, It's hurts me inside, When I say goodbye to you, I keep thinking, Wish you wouldn't leave, I will lose my heart on you, I will cry over you, Don't want to say goodbye, Cause I love you so much, It's hurt me, When I see you gone, Don't want to say goodbye, Please don't leave, Cause I will miss you, When You will be away from me, It's hurts me, When I say goodbye to you, My heart say It a lot, When I say goodbye to you, It's hurts my heart, I cry out for our love To say long, But I guess, It's time to leave, That's why It's hurts my heart, When I say goodbye to you [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
An emotional offering... well put... from the heart... regards, sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana, this one just aches. . . excellent my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Very emotional peice.....I emphathize with your ache.....Tender thoughts to you..... Jenn E |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
lovely poem well written If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
It's always hard to face the goodbyes. If it helps to know, you are in good company here, with hands out to give you support. You wrote this well, my friend! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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