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The Rose (repost) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois 
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 Quite perfect in creation This flower when compared to love Is strong in its relation Its aroma will allure you The fragrance will entrance If it captures all your senses Your heart begins to dance The colors know no boundary T'ween yellow, white and red And love sees not what's outside But what's inside instead Its petals folded tightly They delicately entwine And form a bond together That grows stronger over time Tis quite a thing of beauty As it starts with petals closed And opens to full bloom As love does when it grows [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A rose is just the perfect theme for a good poem, isn't it?... and you've done a wonderful job bringing it to life through your words, Rebecca...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thanks Nan, for such a sweet reply  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Such a pleasant poem, Whtdove. ...chanson~~o~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." ~o~ P.B. Shelley |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Excellent Becky! Awesome analogy! This poem really flows perfectly. Great job! Jester ':~) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
And opens to full bloom As love does when it grows How very true Angel girl! a beautifullly written poem dear, I rememeber this one. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A Thing of beauty here, Dovie...ya make me smile...and the poem is almost as sweet as its author...hugs. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful Becky!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Glad you enjoyed it chansondegeste! My humble thanks Jesse!  Thanks Angel! Thanks Serenity! Glad you like.Sharon my thanks!! |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Becky, lovely! ...love and roses, a combination devine, so well written. Marcy |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love and roses and an author as sweet as a box of chocolates....what more could a great poem want? Wonderful read and so nice is the feeling as I leave to read on. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I liked this a lot...I love roses, they are my favorite flower and are very special to me...thank you for sharing this with us. Elizabeth |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
they say love it's like a (something something) that never wants to (something something) (yadda yadda) the rose... o i love that song and this poem is yuh lovely too |
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