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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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Repost...#1... I think With a title change ******************* Oceanic sound Remands to me The wisdom of the deep. Resurgent pound A heark'ning sea In surfeit at its neap A mere abound Of privity Waves aphorisms leap. Reflections found Imploringly Beseech that I might reap My quests expound In verity ~ Percipience my Keep.  |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nan, this is beautiful! I like the graphic too. Elizabeth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, My love, your poem and graphic are almost as beautiful as you. *L* |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A style all your own, dear Nan....and I love it  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I can hear it... Resurgent pound A heark'ning sea In surfeit at its neap Love the graphic too!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thanks...  Elizabeth - Glad you enjoyed - This is a bit of a heavy hitter, I know... Sy - Sigh... Deer - Likewise.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Quite, quite lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Touche! Fantastic... regards, sudhir |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
OMG! Nan we have an emergency! I understood this poem without a dictionary, I been hanging around you too long. Ohh it could be the influence of that lil red book I have too *smirk* LY!!!! ~H PS...very nice verse, from one ocean-freak to another |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Rebecca - Thanks - then I've succeeded... Marge - Merci.. Sudhir - Fantasmic thanks.. XAngel - Smurkles..... |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Nanners, this is sooooo you. The mercurial rise and fall of the ocean booms mightily in my ear. Very, very sublime. And don't think that I don't know what that little smiley you use means.  |
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Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I do love the ocean..tho I'm a desert rat. Lovely poem!  |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Nan, the rhythm that you have created with the wordsounds and verses in this piece is most lovely...much like the rhythm of the pounding surf. Beautiful, subtle, effective. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Persnikitty - I like your words better than mine.... Sharon - I'll show you mine if you show me yours.. Claire - Such compliments from you are special... Much thanks to all.. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am at such a peaceful moment right now because of your words. Beautiful and yes the graphic was the PERFECT touch. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Nan~ this is really beautiful, I love the ocean...that graphic is wonderful too. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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