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Mr. Shakespeare, Woulds’t Thou Rejoin?
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Mr. Shakespeare, Woulds’t Thou Rejoin? |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Mr. Shakespeare, Woulds’t Thou Rejoin? Thine poetry sings to wanting ears not all hear 'tis true woulds't thou be offended by me if I should sing to you chain of gold holds me strong heart still longs anew waiver not thee from true love’s ties but for lack of words came you should I sing a song of heart know therein you take part for that you see love in poetry know that I see thee and blessed be my soul that you have told of weaving love so fine Nay, I naught thought thy words were wrought to me in tenderness sublime but now thee inscribe and heart now sings a true alliance shall we bring to Passion as we entwine Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
thou hast wrought a perfectly penned poem of passion in the traditional tounge sssssunshine..!!  [This message has been edited by Local Rebel (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rebel of thine heart, t'woulds't thou be inclined to say that this was so very fine... or did it just ROCK!? [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
no... it poemed!!  |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Sunshine this is so great. Written as Shakespeare would. Twas another masterpiece Spoken from heart Thy love for your poetry Will never, ever part. Sunshine, you got it goin' on!! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Sunshine this is so wonderful. As I guess you can tell Mr. Shakespeare is pretty special to me and you have done him great justice. So well done. Juls |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes - The Maestro... Thou say'st it is so..  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, thou hast indeed penned a tribute that speaks to the master himself. . .there were none like him. . . and shall ne'er be none like him again. . . though we try. . . Excellent my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Great work... regards sudhir |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reb, we've got to admire your wit... Susan, your kind heart is showing... Juls...an attempt, enjoyable at that!... Sven, continue to give me all of the encouragement you can...still a grand novice here... Sudhir, thank you! |
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