Open Poetry #9 |
Passion, It's Nice to Know ye... |
Sunshine
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Passion, It’s Nice To Know Ye You came around when I needed you you were there when I didn’t look you’ve come to be the better part of me like the pages of a well-worn book troubled spirit, distressed soul under close scrutiny, lost control forward bound and heaven bent angels listened, then Passions sent You came around when I needed you you were there when I didn’t look you’ve come to be the better part of me like the pages of a well-worn book and as in real life, there’s history a page for you, page for me lessons learned, lessons taught and the ear that I’ve sought You came around when I needed you you were there when I didn’t look you’ve come to be the better part of me like the pages of a well-worn book so to Passions and it’s Poets here know to me and mine you’ve been dear, you’ve come to be the better part of me like the pages of a well-worn book 29 August 2000 ©Karilea Rilling Jungel |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Sunshine - YOU are truly a ray of sunshine to us all. I know I'm new, but have been so blessed by everyone hear at Passions. You all came around when I, too needed you all. This is very beautiful, Sunshine and appreciated I know by all as much as myself. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
You have said it all in this lovely piece. Hi kiddo how are you doing? Have you been missing my addiction to your poetry yet?lol....you know I love this place and your poetry and friendship mean alot to me. |
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Sunshine
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Susan you may be new, but I'll bet you have an old soul...thank you...and I'm looking forward to your long tenure here... Mark! How ARE you! So kind of you to sneak a peek and tell me that things are OK! Be good! No, be GOOD! There, that's better... |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sunshine this is so loving and tender. Made my heart feel really warm.Thanks for sharing your heart, you've touched mine. Hugs, Juls |
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Sunshine
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Juls, you are most welcome. Come back in the dead of winter and see if it works at warming you then, as well...[it's 107 here...] |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is very pretty, Sunshine. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sunshine
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Thank you Claire... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine. . . we are truly blessed for knowing thee. . . A wonderful poem my friend. . . as always. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Yeah .... same to ya' gal ! Are you having fun ... or what ??? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Sven, thank you for coming in... Marge, what made you sit up and take notice...are there rainbow bubbles out there or what?... |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and that well-worn book is very, very comfy - isn't it??.. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This is so full of sweetness. Then again look who wrote it! Wonderful thoughts here. Jenn E |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
And hey Karilea, its much more than nice to know you... in fact it is one of the greatest things to happen... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Nan, I've uncovered yet another book that will be the topic of my feelings...soon...I think you will like... Jenn E...as long as you know the sweet thoughts are NOT saccharine in nature and what you get IS the real thing... Sudhir, your comments are always uplifting, and inspirational...thank you... |
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