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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-08-29 02:25 PM


Passion, It’s Nice To Know Ye

You came around when I needed you
you were there when I didn’t look
you’ve come to be the better part of me
like the pages of a well-worn book

troubled spirit, distressed soul
under close scrutiny, lost control
forward bound and heaven bent
angels listened, then Passions sent

You came around when I needed you
you were there when I didn’t look
you’ve come to be the better part of me
like the pages of a well-worn book

and as in real life, there’s history
a page for you, page for me
lessons learned, lessons taught
and the ear that I’ve sought

You came around when I needed you
you were there when I didn’t look
you’ve come to be the better part of me
like the pages of a well-worn book

so to Passions and it’s Poets here
know to me and mine you’ve been dear,
you’ve come to be the better part of me
like the pages of a well-worn book


29 August 2000
©Karilea Rilling Jungel



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
susanbartee
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1 posted 2000-08-29 03:27 PM


Sunshine - YOU are truly a ray of sunshine to us all.  I know I'm new, but have been so blessed by everyone hear at Passions.  You all came around when I, too needed you all.  This is very beautiful, Sunshine and appreciated I know by all as much as myself.
Mark Bohannan
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2 posted 2000-08-29 03:46 PM


You have said it all in this lovely piece.  Hi kiddo how are you doing?  Have you been missing my addiction to your poetry yet?lol....you know I love this place and your poetry and friendship mean alot to me.
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3 posted 2000-08-29 04:19 PM


Susan you may be new, but I'll bet you have an old soul...thank you...and I'm looking forward to your long tenure here...

Mark! How ARE you! So kind of you to sneak a peek and tell me that things are OK! Be good! No, be GOOD! There, that's better...

juliet_2u
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4 posted 2000-08-29 04:51 PM


Sunshine this is so loving and tender. Made my heart feel really warm.Thanks for sharing your heart, you've touched mine.
Hugs,
Juls

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5 posted 2000-08-29 04:53 PM


Juls, you are most welcome. Come back in the dead of winter and see if it works at warming you then, as well...[it's 107 here...]
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6 posted 2000-08-29 05:13 PM


This is very pretty, Sunshine.  

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-08-29 05:15 PM


Thank you Claire...
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8 posted 2000-08-29 08:57 PM


Sunshine. . .
             we are truly blessed for knowing thee. . .

A wonderful poem my friend. . . as always. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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9 posted 2000-08-29 09:02 PM


Karilea~
Yeah .... same to ya' gal !  
Are you having fun ... or what ???
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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10 posted 2000-08-29 09:04 PM


Sven, thank you for coming in...

Marge, what made you sit up and take notice...are there rainbow bubbles out there or what?...

Nan
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11 posted 2000-08-29 09:17 PM


...and that well-worn book is very, very comfy - isn't it??..
Jenn E
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12 posted 2000-08-29 09:55 PM


This is so full of sweetness. Then again look who wrote it! Wonderful thoughts here.

Jenn E

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13 posted 2000-08-30 06:27 AM


And hey Karilea, its much more than nice to know you... in fact it is one of the greatest things to happen...

regards,
sudhir

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14 posted 2000-08-30 07:00 AM


Nan, I've uncovered yet another book that will be the topic of my feelings...soon...I think you will like...

Jenn E...as long as you know the sweet thoughts are NOT saccharine in nature and what you get IS the real thing...

Sudhir, your comments are always uplifting, and inspirational...thank you...

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