Open Poetry #9 |
Pied Piper |
Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Symphonic histrionics are sometimes loud and brash, Intruding on clear babble of cool brook. The thunder of drums o'erpowers, on limestones clash As waterfall echoes conflict, its rhythm mistook. Discord reverberates; seek solace in calm nook Under treetrunk outstretching the heaving banks. Patience, Pied Piper. Patience as the earth shook. The last chord fades; through him we offer thanks. Sure sway of breeze filters down mountain flanks, Faint chirping of bird rises unconducted. The meadow alive with bright wildflower planks O'er vale and moist dell; Harmony constructed. Capture and absorb, his song fills all parts. Soft music has reached our minds and hearts. ...chanson~ ~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~ |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh wow girl this is gorgeous. Your pen has served you well. Juls |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Juls, a resounding thank you. You never fail to respond so nicely. ...chanson~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is most excellent... regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I'm most appreciative of your kind responses, sudhir. Thank you ...chanson~ ~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~ |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Such a soothing melody your words have sung.. vaery nice indeed.. Steve B |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Nature's symphony...is there anything sweeter to the ear? You did a beautiful job with this one, miss poet. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Pleased you enjoyed the music, Steve ...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Balladeer....no, I don't believe so. Nature plays its own unique music Much thanks for your kind comment! ...chanson~ "Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley |
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