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A Goodbye (reposted for those who may take an interest)
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A Goodbye (reposted for those who may take an interest) |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I step out of the room The darkness has grown so i no longer see all around me the walls are falling in on my ghost of me I glance back at what i have lost at what i have gained all in the past All gone in the long Goodbye Friends i have made Soon to be lost in the sway of memories tide my window closed now outside i must hide How the silence deafens me now my words come as cat calls No inspiration in words or deeds Just another victim in this world where will i be without words To a past unknown and a future uncertain Yet there is one thing that i know I will return I will return |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
is this a g'bye to passions for a while? Just wondering...if so g'bye and g'luck!!...anyway...I got something different out of it....made me think and remember...this has a perfect place in my library... great writing!!!  Julie :) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, I hope you are not leaving. I love your writing. This was another that made me think of many things. Take care. catalinamoon |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
WP* Please say it isn't so!! Your poetry has changed in the last month or so...stepping from the darkness a bit.....I shall miss seeing both sides of your poetry, but if you must then take care and come back soon~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Great writing Walter, It can be interpreted in a few different ways. If this is your goodbye then I echo the others and say take care and return soon! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For Walter ... my poet of the dark... until you too return ... take care of you for me ...please. ~Poetic Roads~ I'll not say ~Goodbye~ to you ... I'll cry no ~Crystal Tears~ For I know you will return from the ~Darklands~... mystical ~Nightwalker~ ... keeper of the fears. I see you in the ~Rain in the Night Sky~ ... I will follow your ~Footsteps in the Sand~. I've seen your gifts ... and ~All The Light Inside~ I know you ... I've been touched by your ~Heart and Hands~ Poetic prophet ...~Wordsmith~ of the shadows ... you've taken me to your ~Castle In The Sky~ On journeys with an ~Ice King and his ~Ice Angel~ the gift of ~Poets Heart Burns Bright~ ... brought tears to my eyes. May you know all your ~Unanswered Prayers~ may you find your ~Intrigue in the Rain~. May the ~Long Road Home~ ... bring you back to me. In this place ... we are a ~Circle of One~ ... in my heart you will remain. Janet Marie ********** There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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