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The Last Good Cry
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The Last Good Cry |
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SorrowsMystress Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 178I'm a wanderer, a nomad...I don't live in one particular area, Just wherever I end up. 
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There are times I want to break down and cry All hope gone All hope lost My mind a fanatical halacaust I reflect on my life on all my pain I see few good times So few of them left My perspective is negative I must keep it in Can't show anyone I hurt Can't show anyone I care Burned out and shoved down A dark, empty pit of emotion that I can no longer feel without bringing the knife to my throat I cry... Finally, I cry And the tears I've waited so long to shed Have all lost their meaning And now I'm alone So cold and alone And no one is around to hold me to comfort me to tell me Everything will be okay I start to think Nothing will ever be okay again Why do the tears flow so easily when all of the emotion is drained out of me I guess I'll never know And with this last sigh I sit and contemplate goodbyes And just as I'm about to break free Something grabs a hold of me I guess I'll live another day and see how things go from here... Besides, they can't get any worse... can they??? **don't worry peeps... not too depressed, just pregnant.. lol.. kinda comes with the territory. "It was my love that did us both to death. " -Sylvia Plath |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Great, sad, moving poem.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi SorrowsMystress, Very glad to see you here, missed you. Congrats on the baby, your poetry today is sad, mine has been this way too lately to mush STUFF in my life that should not be in it. Hope everything starts to go a little bit better for you and if you want to chat e-mail me anytime. Love ya, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
SorrowsMystress, so very sad, yet full of feeling. Never give up, we are all here for you. Life does have good to offer, sometimes we just have to find it! Instead of thinking about what bad has happened today, think of something good!! Smile! |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
You did a wonderful job here and I know exactly how you feel... twice! Will this be your first or do you have others? Either way... Congrats!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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