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What's in a name |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost What's in a name I call her by her Indian name Pseudonym, "Many telephones." She flits a ghost of tomorrow Throughout the present of today. Carries a cell phone in her bag To cover transit and byway And she has one above the bed To blanket for a time delay. A phone to receive her faxes Another by the computer. A master phone in the kitchen Truly a technical wonder. She is thinking of surgery To remove the aging beeper To cut a part the mounting bill A very large and bitter pill. For me I opt the sundial clock, The shamrock and archaic knock. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH SY..man i just loved this. im laughing so hard i cant type i do so adore your wit and grace my friend and i do so adore the consistant wisdom of those now famous last two lines.. later-make-me-laugh-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Oh ..... I love it ! So adorably done with obvious affection. 'She flits a ghost of tomorrow Throughout the present of today.' Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
For me I opt the sundial clock, The shamrock and archaic knock. ... Seymour, these are Jestfully sarcastic, yet affectionate words... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Janet, So glad you enjoyed. Marge, Love ya too. Sudhir, Thank you friend. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I prefer the sundial too, Seymour. Perhaps it's age.  You certainly have a poetic knack for thought translation. Enjoyed this. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I'm right there with ya Sir Tabin. I didn't own a TV for four years... one of the best things I ever did for myself. Unfortunately my wife dosen't share such views. Peace! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Claire, We are of one soul. *L* Andrew, Enjoyed your comment. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Absolutely delightful....enjoyable read. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymour... I love this, and I hate telephones. Everywhere I look, someone has the thing stuck to their ear!!!!!!! This was such fun to read..... I'm going back for seconds!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~Sunny~~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, just what I need to read to unplug! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethome, Glad I could delight you. Sunny1, Help yourself. glad you enjoyed. Sunshine, Don't unplug them all. *L* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey - at least you know the sundial is always accurate.... but what does it do during daylight savings??? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm with you, Sy! You know what really annoys me? A ringing phone on the train...I mean really, can't people even be without a phone for a half hour? Unbelieveable. Delightful poem, Sy! Denise |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sy, I tried a sundial wristwatch once but it broke my wrist 3 times! Enjoyed the words....... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, I give up what? *L* Denice, Thanks for the delight, *L* Balladeer, They have a miniture one now, try it again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder what my Indian name is |
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