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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-08-01 11:51 AM

I Thought Of You Today...

I thought of you today
as the tears and strain
that have racked my body
eased a bit.

Soaking in the warmth,
and shine of the sun,
after days of torment
I sat on concrete steps,
uncomfortable, but solid.
I saw your eyes smile at me.

I felt them watching
every little movement I made,
the twitching I have
at the corners of my mouth, now
wanting lips to touch
and heal them
back to softness.

I thought of you today
My eyes closed
but seeing clearly
sparked a memory of touch,
of passionate words
that will always remain with me
especially
in times of need.

Your pale skin,
your gentle looks
your almost smiles.
I can do nothing
but think of you
this way
today.

I let the breeze play in my hair
leaned back against the rail
(for some needed support)
felt your fingers
tangling there.
A come-on whisper
touched my ear
I thought of you
in this way
here.

I thought of you with opened eyes
in bluest blue
of cloudless skies
then one began to float in view
and dreamt I, then
of only you.

I thought of you today
no tears in eyes
I'll smile again
contented moment
of times
back then.

especially when
I thought of you today...

M *2k

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-01-2000).]

Tess
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since 2000-03-22

Posts 288
Australia

1 posted 2000-08-01 12:34 PM

Even at the saddest times, its funny how those memories of ones we've loved come back to haunt us.
Lovely poem

"Life is like music; it must be composed by ear, feeling, and instinct, not by
rule."~ Samuel Butler ~

Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
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2 posted 2000-08-01 12:39 PM

beautiful

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-08-01 01:39 PM

Tess..thank you for reading...these are wonderful thoughts I had...that day
~~softly smiling
Maureen

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
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4 posted 2000-08-01 01:54 PM

Such sweet and lovely remeniscence Maureen ... beautiful thoughts indeed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Sunshine

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5 posted 2000-08-01 01:59 PM

Lovely...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

Eddie de Jong
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since 2000-07-31

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6 posted 2000-08-01 03:17 PM

Amazing how the warm and fuzzy thoughts start coming through once the turmoil has settled.

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-08-01 06:39 PM

Rosebud
beautiful is a word that stands all alone and means so much
thank you
Maureen

brian madden
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8 posted 2000-08-01 07:02 PM

MM a beautifully written poem.

"I am melancholy, flower cutting through stone"
manic street preachers

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-08-01 07:22 PM

kit ...I love to think back even if it's not that far behind

thank you
Maureen

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-08-01 08:18 PM

Sunshine...lovely is such a nice comment thank you
~~soft smiles
Maureen

tulip
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11 posted 2000-08-01 09:18 PM

Wow,
This was beautifully written. Thanks for sharing!!!

MMoonchild
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12 posted 2000-08-01 10:30 PM

Eddie ...love those warm and fuzzy thoughts

whenever they show up

thank you for your visit
~~soft smiles
Maureen

courtney923
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13 posted 2000-08-01 10:46 PM

I really enjoyed your poem.

Alwye

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In the space between moments

14 posted 2000-08-01 10:55 PM

so gorgeous... Such longing and love...you have incredible talent.

*Krista Knutson*

"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back."
-Barbara DeAngelis

MMoonchild
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15 posted 2000-08-02 12:55 PM

Brian... tulip...thank you both very much for reading and commenting..I appreciate your kindness
~~soft smiles
Maureen

JulieAnn
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16 posted 2000-08-02 01:47 AM

I loved this....remembering sometimes is better than the actual event....great expression....I liked it a lot!!

Julie :)

MMoonchild
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17 posted 2000-08-02 01:48 PM

courtney and Krista thank you both for you sweet comments they are appreciated very much
~~softly
Maureen

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

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highways, & byways, for now

18 posted 2000-08-02 08:53 PM

MMoonchild, I sat back with many thoughts as I read this poem you have written. It was so nice to stop by and see this work, and then think of memories.

MMoonchild
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19 posted 2000-08-03 12:31 PM

thank you Bill..it is always nice to have you visit
~~soft smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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20 posted 2000-08-04 02:12 AM

JulieAnn

thank you, I think I had missed you...my last few days have been sort of a blur... memories are so real to me...
~~softly M

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

21 posted 2000-08-04 02:33 AM

Memories hold dear to the times of love's innocense. They often are the reason we seek that level again disregarding the pain that so many times before has rocked us back

lovely write....your pen serves you well.

MMoonchild
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22 posted 2000-08-04 03:34 AM

so sweet you are Mark..and now you have me writing my own heart poem if I can only get to it..I have had so many responses today from not being on here I am overwhelmed by them...
~~softly sighing...and it took me forever to figure out how to load a picture..
Maureen

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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23 posted 2000-08-04 04:26 AM

Maureen you have the softest flowing sensual style.......sort of like a purring kitten.. I know the content reflects some actual lonliness but you have such a wonderful style to deal with it.

MMoonchild
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24 posted 2000-08-04 07:38 AM

sort of like a purring kitten...I like that E....this would be me if I could be a kitten...sweet as Sugar (my cat)

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

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25 posted 2000-08-04 07:59 AM

"the twitching I have
at the corners of my mouth, now
wanting lips to touch
and heal them
back to softnes"

You write so beautifully, and these lines are wondrous to me.
A sad theme written in exquisite phrase
I loved this one
Liz

MMoonchild
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26 posted 2000-08-04 09:20 AM

Liz, thank you I appreciate your kind words
~~softly
Maureen

passing shadows
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27 posted 2004-05-02 07:56 PM

sweet write...very passionate

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