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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind 
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Like needles Pricking, searing. Each nerve struck, Firing Senses raging out of control. In a whirlwind Sense of glare. Remorse Feelings left barren, An action that can never reverse. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Speaking out of anger and without thought can and has killed many a bond. You have penned wise words of warning and done it well.  |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
An excellent poem, full of wisdom and all done is so few words... impressive to say the least... regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 08-30-2000).] |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
You packed a lot of meaning into a short space. very well done! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
words cut deeper than any knife and the wounds they infict never heal...great job this |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mariee~ WONDERFULLY done ! Crisp, clean and clearly stated. (Nice picture ... good to 'see' you) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
Well said and well done. Short and too the point. I like it. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is a wonderfully written poem, that packs a powerful message!! Very nice writing..... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Thank you all for reading and leaving such gracious replies. I'm happy that I was able to convey my message...was worried that some might not get it  Thanks again, Marie~ |
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