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Would You Know Me? Soulmate Soliloquy
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Would You Know Me? Soulmate Soliloquy |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Would You Know Me? Soulmate Soliloquy In my thoughts I often ponder these feelings alone make one wonder if true Soulmates we would ever be could you now then recognize me? If you were to search far then wide how should you know I did not abide right here hourly by your side… could, in daily view, I hide? You thought you had one, fine and true a soulmate’s friend, the words echoed in you now she’s vanished, you sit alone can there a soulmate be, outside a loveless home? If you viewed me sitting here with friends if our eyes would meet, imagine what then ~ question what might happen if I looked to you could green eyes then portend as to any other clue? Should I be dropped right before your feet would you know me on the street? Would you feel the chemistry born of other lives and times? Would you know if the truth were torn from your miserable hide? Or are you going to say “Kaput” and simply leave true love lie? Would you never see the love dying here and now before your eyes… In my thoughts I often softly ponder these feelings alone could make one wonder… If I could be your soulmate why can’t you be mine? 28 August 2000 Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Some very intriguing questions here... nicely done!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Lady, sounds "forced" to me, but today I'm my worst critic! Now, that should let some of those in that would love to tear it apart...and I say...HAVE AT IT! [I guess I'm ready for a make-over!] HA! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunshine, I like this a lot. And since i am no ones critic except my own, (and maybe my husbands), I would never tear apart your poem. I will say the second half flowed better to me than the first. But the whole was still good, and the intense thoughts here, poured out with a little touch of anger. I would ask the same exact question of someone, but he won't answer me either! As usual, you write of things that touch me. catalinamoon |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--I really liked this...some interesting and disturbing thoughts...I wonder if I wonder too much will I disturb the universe? |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
love the thoughts, Sunshine. One half of soul-mates is like one bookend or one shoe...not worth much on its own  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
would I know you. . . this is wonderful my friend. . . I know that many of us have asked these questions ourselves. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
sunshine... you definitely have a way with this poetry thing... hehe... you're GOOD at this! geez... yep... and yeah, what's one sock? could be a laundry quandary... y'know? it's best to believe in sole mates, no matter who's shoe it fits... (whatever that means)... great writing, my poet friend! (oh, and still haven't forgot our little "duet"... will do that soon and maybe you'll be ready to dance to it, too *smile*) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful and sad all in the same poetic weave...as is true to your poetic nature you have penned another great~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat [geesh, I really like your name!] thanks for letting me know that you get something out of my work...that truly means a lot! Martie, it's your JOB to disturb the universe...but you do it SO delightfully... 'Deer, would that we all continue to search for the shoe's mate!... Sven, thank you for looking in... doreen...hugs...always makes my day when you peek in to read!... BDC...touching emotions is something I do strive for...sounds like I did...thanks for letting me know! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
If you were a male wolf - I could see you howling at the sky - for that mate to hear the excellence of your voice. and you know we males are told early in life "Faint heart ne'er won fair lady" In these millennial times - I see no reason you should not REALLY let your intended know ~S~ ~Love one human being purely and warmly, and you will love all. The heart in this heaven, like the sun in its course, sees nothing from the dew drop to the ocean, but a mirror which it brightens, and warms and fills. ~ Johann Richter ~ wilfredyeats@hotmail.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
{~,~} regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, a kind reply...and words of wisdom spoken with true heart...we shall see... Sudhir, {~,^} |
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