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Lily121
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since 2000-05-23
Posts 24


0 posted 2000-08-28 04:08 PM


I Pen This with My Blood

This letter I am writing to you
You who I truly love
You who will not respond
You who is not there at all

This letter that I write to you
This letter, I admit, is very true.
We stand on two sides of a wall
And there is no way to get over at all

Whenever I Go out to meet you
You are not there
Whenever I try to greet you
You do not care

I sacrifice my time to you
This is very true
I sacrifice my trust to you
And what do you do? Throw it away

I wait by this wall
Loving you through all
I wait day and night
For you, my only love

This letter I write to you, if you read it at all
Will tell you what I suffer
Oh why is my love so noble?
This letter I write to you I pen with my own blood.




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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-08-28 04:16 PM


So sad and full of hurt...but powerful nonetheless...
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-08-28 04:27 PM


I feel your pain.
Take care of your heart.
Love does not require blood...James

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