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Always and Forever
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Always and Forever |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma 
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"Always" and "Forever" We always say always, But always can change. We always say forever, But forever could end today. I said I'd always love you, But now I just don't know. You told me lies and made me cry, And told me to "Just go." Forever seemed to die that day, It ended pretty fast. I found the truth in all your lies, Forever's now a past. "Always" and "Forever," Where did those words go? You said I'll always love you, And forever it will show. I said I'd always love you, And now I just don't know. I told you that forever, My love would always show. I guess I gave these words to easy, Though I thought that they were true. For now I know that "Always" and "Forever," Was just a lie behind the truth. |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
Really like this line.. "Forever seemed to die that day," and the "lies behind the truth". Good one, I enjoyed reading!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Forever and Always seem to roll off the tougne when it's Here and Now.....as if it's more of a hope than a promise...Great writing Lil~ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
"Forever's now the past"... This is nicely done.... I like the way you develop your theme, Amy - Looks like you learned as much in English as you did in geometry...  |
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Sylvester Junior Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 16 |
"..just lies behind the truth" Isn't that just the way it is all too often? Wise words here, LiLOnE..  |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Thank you all for reading my poem I am so glad you liked it! ...Ladysixstring-Thank you for the kind words Butterflies-Unfortunitally your right.. and a lot of times words like thoes end up in broken hopes and broken hearts.  Thank you Nan You've been a supporter of my poems from day one! I appreacite all you have done for me. Though, My poems do not come from english class... they come from the heart But I did learn a lot in geo hehe thank you so much Sylvester-Yeah unfortunitally is it And its sad it's that way but it is. Thank you for commenting... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent poem. It has a very nice flow to it. |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Thanx eloise Glad u liked it! |
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