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MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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0 posted 2000-08-28 02:53 PM


Windows of My Night

Outside my window
the night sky filling up with stars,
the moon disappearing on this night,
drifting, I hear the loneliness echoing.

I feel no comfort
from the covering of the dark.
To be together, even when apart,
is my desire.
To hear the music of your voice,
is my want.
To feel your every movement,
is my passion.

You have entered my heart
through these eyes, haunting me,
catching me offguard,
unaware of the hidden longings within.
You have woven my thoughts with yours,
embracing every fiber of me
with the want of you.

As the stillness of the night settles in,
I am caught up in the pleasure of my thoughts
lying there, in the warmth of your arms,
my eyes watching as you sleep,
closing mine to dream...there...
in the windows of my night.


M
*2k



© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Eddie de Jong
Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27

1 posted 2000-08-28 03:14 PM


You have woven my thoughts with yours,
embracing every fiber of me
with the want of you.

You weave quite a spell lady !!   I always enjoy yours.

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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2 posted 2000-08-28 04:02 PM


thank you Eddie, I am glad you visit my words
~~soft  smiles
Maureen

* I always have to edit..my U doesnt get pressed hard enough I wonder why ..will have to study the pressure I use...

[This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-28-2000).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
3 posted 2000-08-28 04:20 PM



  Maureen...
           This is so beautiful and loving...and I enjoyed reading this very much.  I like your style!!


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



susanbartee
Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119
Channelview, TX USA
4 posted 2000-08-28 04:25 PM


I, too so love your style.  This is another beautifully written piece of art.  
MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-08-28 05:01 PM


Sunny and Susan..thank you for such nice praise...
I enjoy writing, and just hope someone else enjoys reading
~~soft hugs  to you both
Maureen

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2000-08-28 08:56 PM


Hi Maureen,
You have touched me once again with your writing, so soft, meaningful, and deep seated words.

softly I smile.....

MMoonchild
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since 2000-07-13
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7 posted 2000-08-28 11:53 PM


Hi Bill
you have touched me with your response and boy did I need something tonight...
~~soft sighing
Maureen

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