Open Poetry #9 |
Windows of My Night |
MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Windows of My Night Outside my window the night sky filling up with stars, the moon disappearing on this night, drifting, I hear the loneliness echoing. I feel no comfort from the covering of the dark. To be together, even when apart, is my desire. To hear the music of your voice, is my want. To feel your every movement, is my passion. You have entered my heart through these eyes, haunting me, catching me offguard, unaware of the hidden longings within. You have woven my thoughts with yours, embracing every fiber of me with the want of you. As the stillness of the night settles in, I am caught up in the pleasure of my thoughts lying there, in the warmth of your arms, my eyes watching as you sleep, closing mine to dream...there... in the windows of my night. M *2k |
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Eddie de Jong Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27 |
You have woven my thoughts with yours, embracing every fiber of me with the want of you. You weave quite a spell lady !! I always enjoy yours. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Eddie, I am glad you visit my words ~~soft smiles Maureen * I always have to edit..my U doesnt get pressed hard enough I wonder why ..will have to study the pressure I use... [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Maureen... This is so beautiful and loving...and I enjoyed reading this very much. I like your style!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
I, too so love your style. This is another beautifully written piece of art. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Sunny and Susan..thank you for such nice praise... I enjoy writing, and just hope someone else enjoys reading ~~soft hugs to you both Maureen |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Maureen, You have touched me once again with your writing, so soft, meaningful, and deep seated words. softly I smile..... |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Hi Bill you have touched me with your response and boy did I need something tonight... ~~soft sighing Maureen |
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