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A/s/l
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Seems everyone asked too soon, Quickly asked, As soon as enters the room, Age, sex and your location, In the short In a chatroom notation. Give them all information Stories asked For brief evaluation. Settle yourself, there in the room, Watching others conversing, Then someone tries to pierce through, Undaunted by age of Gloom, Spirits slowly traversing, Gathering moments of two, Inside and outside the room. Then one day, There was nothing more to say, Gone away. Gone. Gloom |
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ladysixstring Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 374 |
So different... I enjoyed this very much!! -jaimie Website: www.ladysixstring.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Gloom, does A/S/L refer to age, sex and location? I don't know much about chat rooms, but your words conveyed a very human experience, taken place within what seems to be a very anonymous environment. As always, your sense of mood comes through quite effectively. I look forward to your work. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
I agree...so different..but yet so you ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ah....the chat room scenario!! Never had much fun there......can't type fast enough I guess!!!! But, did enjoy this read! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
rofl HOW annoying! I used to go to msn chat all the time and that was the first thing someone would do....come in the room, immediately whisper you and say A/S/L??? Then if instead, I'd say "hi", they'd repeat A/S/L??????? LOL so I would say.... "I'm from Wisconsin, 449#, 53 yrs old, 4'11", oh and female, but I do male impersonations from time to time..." That usually shut them up.  fun lil snippet of thought here [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Give me passion's chatter anytime...much more fulfilling... by the way, I'm 180 years old, of questionable sex, and I'm everywhere! |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
i think just about anybody who has ever entered a chat room will agree and understand this poem to the utmost....i know i can...nice write here professor gloom  "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
ah professor Gloom I'll assume nice to meet you. Your so right about the asl thing the minute you step in they're stepping on your toes wanting to know your life's story. But hey got to have something to chat about, as for me I would rather tell of someone else it's more fun that way lol.. very good poem! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I don't like chat rooms..you spend half your time saying hello or goodbye to everyone! A/S/L should be: Are you a poet? Should be a poet? Love for you to be a poet!  |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
as you know PG..I don't ever enter chatrooms except for one time...hmmmmm..and that was not very pleasant  but I didn't even know what asl meant...'til today...very interesting~~soft smiles Child of the Moon [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 08-29-2000).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you all, for taking the time to respond to my words. I am honored so many can enjoy. Gloom |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Nice one Professor....I know the scenario well........ Perhaps your next one should be Whisper Me!! |
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