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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sorry I'm late it took me forever to get here Forever to realize you are the one To get to this place in my life Where I can say I love you All the roads I've traveled down All the lives I've lived have led to you I've learned lifes lessons sometimes the hard way I've loved, I've lost but now I am here You have been my destination Now you are my journeys end. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Paula, this is beautiful! I love it! Denise |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
What a lucky guy Paula? LOL Great work as usual.  Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Denise...thank you. Ronil...I am the one who is lucky...thanks. Yesterday is gone...tomorrow may never happen...we only ever have today |
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Diane Yvonne Junior Member
since 2000-08-22
Posts 36Camdenton,Mo. USA |
Wonderful writing, enjoyed reading this one. Best Wishes Diane |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Paula ~ what you speak of is poetry, the poetry of life, what it is all about, I can only wish you many years to enjoy, as you no longer need luck.. Steve B |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Paula, I loved what you had to say in this... "You have been my destination Now you are my journeys end." What great lines. So very romantic Michael by Michael Auguste "But I am so like everyone. And everyone is so like me We cork our contents, lest they flee Until our lives are spent and d |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
very sweet and well written. Good write. |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Wonderful work! Very sweet and so heartfelt. Enjoyed the read. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Life may not be easy but the hardknocks are worthwhile when journey's end is sweet. I enjoy your words, Paula ...chanson~~"Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory..." P.B. Shelley~ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Better late than never Paula...I'm glad your journey has ended, but it sounds as though your life has only just begun |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was so sweet Paula. I am glad your journey has ended and to all I wish that same wish. BEAUTIFUL! Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ The destination is sweet reward ! Nice flow to this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Diane...thank you very much for reading Steve B...LOL guy a little luck never hurts, but thanks...(mystery...geez...lol) Michael...you always say the sweetest things thank you my friend Mark...your praise is always appreciated thank you. MysticalNights...thank you I appreciate you reading. chanson...thanks it is a sweet reward hoot_owl_rn...yes it took a while but all the detours were worth it Jenn E...thank you for your sweet wishes Marge...a long road but one well worth traveling when THIS destination was reached...thanks Yesterday is gone...tomorrow may never happen...we only ever have today |
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