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Liaison Mi `Amour
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Liaison Mi `Amour |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Liaison Mi `Amour ~*Marge Tindal*~ 'neath mossy covered arbor under glowing orb of night Liaison Mi `Amour ever seemed so right Arms of gentle rapture hold this loved one near Love in diminutive kisses Starlit ceiling sparkles clear Too soon the early dawn comes peeking other lives now seeking No more will we be speaking long into the night Partings of the heart brings sorrow with the light Mi `Amour - Mi `Amour Ce sentiment d'abandon Que la nuit tombe tôt ! That feeling of desertion How early falls the night ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautifully done, Marge! Love the touches of French too even though I don't understand most of it!  Denise |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Tres bien mon cheri!!!!!!!! Je t'adore mon ami Les belle ala poetry! [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ooooh La La! What an exquisite flow to this Marge ... lovely and melodic! Tres bien mon ami! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
I will have to agree with Denise...VERY beautiful, but my French is not up to snuff...but a language of romance is what it is and your poem here is "tres" romantic in an almost sad way...(going back to read again) Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Sigh... French, so beautiful. I love French!(can't understand a word of it, but still beautiful!) This is a wonderful piece, Marge. Another jewel from you, my friend. PS- Did I say I loved the French??? "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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menage a demideux Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 32 |
C'est un morceau romantique merveilleux de poésie! Beau vers! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Just beautiful, Marge...a rendezvous of love and longing, and you've composed it so tenderly. ~ Claire< !signature--> Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thanks for enjoying it. I use very little of my French as it doesn't go quite as well with this southern accent.  MarkB~ Thank you, kind sir. You're pretty special. Kit~ I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it. Sonjes~ I would have to join hands with you, Denise and LoveBug on the French. Certain phrases are a delightful inspiration to me. *Last two English lines = Last two French lines. LoveBug~ I'm convinced - You LOVE French !!  Menage~ Thank you for the 'marvellous' ! Claire~ I so appreciate you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enchante, madame, tres, tres bien! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge --the whole piece is romantically beautiful..and written as only you can...but somehow that French just capped it off, even though I didn't understand it. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Cette poésie était belle! J'ai apprécié la passion appelée par l'utilisation de deux langages, presque comme si les amoureux ont manqué en français dans la chaleur du moment. Je suis sans aucun doute certain que vous avez créé un chef d'oeuvre romantique! adieu mon ami ~Heather |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
enchante Madame Marge...tres magnifique |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Thanks for the delightful thoughts. Martie~ Thanks, love. I wish I had the opportunity to use it more. I don't ... but do enjoy certain phrases. XAngel~ Thank you ... I don't know about 'masterpiece' .. but will concede 'romantic'. The lover's 'lack in French' is more the author's lack of a command of the language... the 'heat' burns as hot in Braille ! ! Thank you for the wonderful response. You do French good enough for both of us ! I shall remember that if I need help. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ You sneaked in while I was studying my responses. Thank you for the 'magnificent'. I always appreciate knowing you enjoyed what I write. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully written Marge. I knew there was some reason I took two years of French in high school... so I could read this wonderful poem... and French with a Kansas accent sounds worse than with a southern accent... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Vous remercie ! And I might concure with you except for - Y'all come on down now, ya' heah ? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Torn New Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 9Williamson |
LOVLY! Nice writing, im new so i havent read a lot of your posts! I really liked this one |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Torn~ Welcome to Passion's. Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed this one. Hope you will peruse the talents of many here. ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 08-28-2000).] |
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Steve B Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 140Southern PA |
Chère Marge ~ triste mais admirablement écrire...garder bonne foi.. Steve B |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SteveB~ Thank you for the admiration. Separation is sadly felt in the heart of lovers. I appreciate the comments. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is exquisite poetry.... Marge, did I ever mention that you are a genius... well no... okay so now I just did mention it... regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I thank you for so many things ... your friendship is a treasure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Querido Marge, I would have to really brush up on my Spanish to finish writing this message in the only foreign language I know. I'll do us both a favor and use English. Who knows what I would come up with in Spanish...LOL!I love this poem. The mood you create, the parting...I felt it. Marie~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, You have a gift...this is so lovely. French? Nope, I don't speak a word. I can barely manage my Southern drawl. By the way, Poppie is on the way back...With Poppie's help Claire and I composed "His Elusive Muse." Camilla left a bit later but should be there pretty soon. She helped me out on "Embrace of the Sea." They were such a big help and I do appreciate you sending them. Take care, my friend. Your poetry is such a pleasure to read, and a high point in my day. Michae |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Marge, You have a gift...this is so lovely. French? Nope, I don't speak a word. I can barely manage my Southern drawl. By the way, Poppie is on the way back...With Poppie's help Claire and I composed "His Elusive Muse." Camilla left a bit later but should be there pretty soon. She helped me out on "Embrace of the Sea." They were such a big help and I do appreciate you sending them. Take care, my friend. Your poetry is such a pleasure to read, and a high point in my day. Michae |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
C'est magnifique! Je suis enchante. Votre poesie es tres belle And so is your heart Well done, indeed! Liz |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-Truely beautiful, touches the heart. |
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