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Eye of the Eagle
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Eye of the Eagle |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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As I ride the wind above mountain's peak.. Or pause to rest at forest creek.. My eye beholds what yours must seek.. I see you.... To me, the view is focused clear.. Your world below seems small up here.. I wonder at your love, your fear.. I see you.... I glide the rainbows in the sky.. While in a silver bird you fly.. I hear you laugh....I feel you cry.. I see you.... I'm just a bird, not right or wrong.. You're just a man, not here for long.. We share a world...We share a song.. I see you.... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ Oh, I like this. The spirit of the eagle soars and beholds the sight of many a man. Very majestically spiritual to me. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful and lyrical flow this has Sunny! Almost a mystical, magical feel ... lovely form and style!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
You have caught me in your web of magic, Sunny1...lovely imagery used in this lyric of life. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sunny, beautiful images, and I have to tease you, I love that line "You're just a man".. Lovely poem. Catalinamoon |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
True, I'm just a man but I too have eyes to see grateful to see you Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOH Sunny girl you soar with this one |
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menage a demideux Junior Member
since 2000-05-11
Posts 32 |
a silver bird!!!.... hmmmmmmm... what an inspiration for poetic verse! thanks for the read you've got me thinking and have inspired me to write something .... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sunny, Wow! I love it!! This is a definite keeper. Well done, my friend. Michael by Michael Auguste "But I am so like everyone<br> And everyone is so like me We cork our contents, lest they flee Until our lives are spent |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marge... Yes, the spirit of the eagle is in every man, (and woman)!! Thank you!! Hi Kit... Oh, thank you so much....I was hoping for that mystical effect, as that what eagles remind me of!! Hi sonjes... I am glad you enjoyed the pictures in this.....I love images too!! Thank you!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Cat... It's ok....I tease easy!! Glad to see you here, and thank you, too!! Hi Jamie... You're more than just a man, my friend.....you are a poetic marvel in my eyes!!! Thank you for your verse...good to see you!! Hi Paula... Sometimes I sit and watch all the eagles here.....we get around 5,000 in the Winter as this is their gathering site. They are beautiful creatures....full of grace and spirit! Thank you, my friend!! Hi menage a demideux... I am glad this inspired you.....I will be looking for your thoughts!! Thank you so much!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Michael... Thank you once again, my friend! Together we will soar on eagle's wings, touching the sky.....you and I...... Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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