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Good Morning |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Good Morning ~~~ The coffee pot grows piping hot alarm so cruelly dread Aroma flips a toggle switch where slumber crowds my head ~ Life-light flickers but nothing stirs which comes as no surprise Then upon my cheek your magic kiss enchants the sparkle to lifeless eyes ~ " Good Morning " ~~~  [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 08-27-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Nice way to wake up. I especially like the coffee part.LOLOL....sometimes it is what is most needed. Nice read early this morning. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I don't drink coffee and the only one here to give me a wake up smooch is my pooch! But I loved your poem. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Coffee....well I am out and I am trying to substitute coke....aaaggghhhh...it is not working...loved this poem though there is noone I would want to kiss my cheek that early in the morning!!!!!  Julie :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Rex.... I agree with Mark....a really nice way to wake up!! Great writing, fun reading, and now I want some Baileys in my coffee, please!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Eddie de Jong Junior Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 27 |
Great write. Evening here so I will have to wait to the morning to apply  |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh Rex ... I will exchange the coffee for a tea, but will gladly take the kiss! Wonderful morning pick-me-upper you've penned (even though 'tis evening as I read) Hmmm...Perhaps I shall change my order to hot chocolate and a hug then? Great work!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Nice wake up call, though I prefe hot chocolate or tea to coffee. Elizabeth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ Just my cup of coffee ! I enjoyed this and will have a cup of the hot brew. Good morning to you too ! Good evening as well ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Rex! Cute little dragon too! Denise |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
a cup of coffee AND a kiss? I definitely need the coffee before i can stand to be touched...NOT a morning person.  But I loved this one RexDon't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I love it Rex! Coffee brewing, just can't go on without it. But there's no morning kiss...LOL more like the light switch flipped on and it's 5 o'clock, get up. LOL Great poem! I really enjoyed this one, and I'll have to come back with my coffee in the morning and enjoy it again |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks everyone ... I had an individual reply written last night ... to most of you ... but I fell asleep in the chair and my hand was still on the mouse ... woke up 2 hrs later and everything was gone ... I fall asleep so easily lately ... must have high blood sugar or something ... diabetes? Not sure I want to find out |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Good morning, Rex...love your poem... ~ Claire |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Rex, I hope it's nothing more than just exhaustion. Get it checked out! Hope you're doing better soon! |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Rex, short, sweet and to the point. Loved it. What better way to start your day with coffee and a kiss. I'm new here and was wondering how everyone puts these smiles, DRAGONS (loved it), etc?? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quick, get thee to a doctor, as I must have more dragons in my coffee... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
G O O D M O R N I N G . . . and regards sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I'm a few days late in reading this, But Good Morning today! This was a great wake up call Liz |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
More than a few days late in reading this Rex, and it's afternoon now, well here it is. As is usual for you a really great poem, and a beautiful good day to you. Lovely way to rise and shine, or should that be smile and shine!! :  /font>[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 08-31-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a sweet awakening...coffee flavored kisses |
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~Enigma~ Junior Member
since 2000-07-03
Posts 44St Cloud, MN |
I loved the way you said 'good morning'! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well it certainly woke me up... good one If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Coffee with a touch of sugar...I like how you make a cup of "Good Morning" Rex!! |
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