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Heights of Fantasy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Ride with me through dreams of love nectar flowing from above. Daytime fades to force of night join with you in stars soft light. Drink with me of passions chalice fly with me to distant palace. Perch on edge of battlements knowing what the Gods have sent. Sit with me upon the moon dream the dream of coming soon. Lay me down in velvet night feel the heat as we ignite. Rapt illusion of my heart with the dawn, do you depart? Choose to fly so high and free, come my dark knight, come to me... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Just LOVELY ! 'Sit with me upon the moon dream the dream of coming soon. Lay me down in velvet night feel the heat as we ignite.' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MMMMMMM this feels like a dream...I enjoyed this tremendously |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful flow. Like very much. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
wonderful flow. Like very much. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey you know what? I really really like this. It is beautiful and the vision of sitting on the moon is quite entrancing. Loved it much. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Each verse has such exquisite detail .. it's a beautiful expression in poetry  Thanx 4 an enjoyable read to end my Saturday eve Coco |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Definitely my kind of romantic writing/reading - you go - you're on my reading list! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
so beautiful! *sigh* ~Dawn |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cat, magical poem beautiful thoughts. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ohhh...this is really nice, I too, like the idea of sitting on the moon...seems to be a favorite line of most! I see now why you like MY writing - it's very much like yours! Looks like we have some similar patterns and rhyme schemes...I will definately be reading more from you! This was longingly romantic...*sigh* |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sandra, my dear friend, this is really wonderful poetry!!!! I am sitting here listening to the Moody Blues and your writing is on the same high level as my all-time fav, Justin Hayward!! I love it....it's mystical and magical......... Perfect!!!!!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
This created some lovely pictures for me. Took me away for a few moments. loved it. Dee |
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