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Meditation - it is when serenity inspires
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Meditation - it is when serenity inspires |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Meditation I placed my eye towards the canopy - a diamond-studded sky a blanketed sea, wished a wish-- that I could fly amongst ethereal celestial forms and I was transported high woke up bleary-eyed what a dream! willed against will, shut the doors, eye-lids closed to their core, the inner eye opened and in view the skies divined in haloed light. ~ Thanks O Serene One... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Sudhir, I am completely envious now, you are doing on of the things that makes Passions work so well and that is learning from other people's style. You are doing this perfectly and with such ease, not mirroring their style but rather taking the style and adding your own layers. Slow down or I will never be able to catch up LOL Wonderful poem. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks brian, for a most wonderful way of flattering... regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A lovely weave Sudhir ... ahhh, to go back to sleep and dream the dreams again ... wonderful!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks Kit... a huge lot...  regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ I found you meditating on the back pages ! Lovely thoughts. Dreams AND inspiration ... Ahhh ! Serenity indeed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OhmiGosh---Oh me Sudhir---I am difficult even in complacency!!!!I wish you all my love, and oh boy,, do I wish I was there with you, showing me all of the sights....through your eyes, me'freind....I'd pay for thrice. This was just so nice of you...thank you. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
~~sigh~~ Lovely....simply lovely, Sudhir. ..chanson~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
willed against will, shut the doors, eye-lids closed to their core, the inner eye opened and in view the skies divined in haloed light. When I grow up I want to be just like you. what a wonderful dream and visions in your minds eye. Lovely sir just lovely. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Sudhir, My, my, what beautiful words doth flow from you. I am glad that I stopped for this one. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh, this is truly impressive...as is all your work! What I wouldn't give to crawl around inside that mind of yours for awhile. |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
beautiful indeed sudhir.. i enjoyed this a lot, thank you for the read "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Marge, These are some of the loveliest words I have received... Thanks Serenity, this is all your inspiration, yet youa re ready to pay me thrice???  Thanks, my friend...Chanson, Thank you very much... Mark, you are the forever friend....thanks Bill, I am glad that you liked what you saw... and thanks for stopping by... Tennessee Angel, well... I love the sentiments, but I wouldn't get into my mind for any thing in the world... full of demons you see... them squirming creatures... thank youJnR4Eva, Thanks a huge bunch... regards to all, sudhir |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Hi Sudhir, this is sooooooo pretty and tranquil to the mind .. puts one at peace reading each line. Nice to read another gem from you! Coco |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
cocobaci, thank you so much for coming by... and I am glad that you felt it to be calming regards, sudhir |
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