Open Poetry #9 |
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Sweet Breath of Poetry |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Sweet Breath of Poetry I am swirling in paint pull me out throw me against the canvas see all my melt and fathom no this easel is clean and not my turmoil Is this heat music can the drumming that is spirit play the symphony whose strings weep violin where do I play where sing this music where explore the colors that absorb my meaning but poetry sweet breath of my soul poetry |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You are always welcome here, Martie, but I'm afraid the couch is taken...a sweet breath of poetry you are...thank you my friend for touching my heart in the style that is yours alone...hugs. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ A such a 'fresh breath' you are ! Always refreshingly unique. 'can the drumming that is spirit play the symphony whose strings weep violin' Oh, it not only can ... it does ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
No artist with brush am I - if I am ever to achieve acclaim - it will be with the printed word - You - on the other hand -at least in the eyes of all who've read you here, especially me - are an artist with words. - This canvas we call forum - is yours for words of meaningful color. - Paint on! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Some try and write poetry, some write poetry, and a special few are their poetry. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Martie! Lovely painting! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
by the way... loved the poem. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serenity--you are a sweet replier...and I thank you for what you have said. Hi Marge--Thank you again for being you. Bill--what a beautiful thing to say...thanks for the words, and the friendship! Mike--the ultimate compliment..you are the best! and a second to say what your heart forgot, thank you. Denise--What would I do without you? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
And you Martie, are a sweet breath of poetry upon my ears! This is beautiful! I have missed reading you and listening to you ![]() *hugs* Maree |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This is just beautiful, Martie. What you can do with words is phenomenal... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Maree--I am so glad to see you...someday I must call you and read you a poem..you are so sweet. Claire--Thank you so much for your always unique way with words. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
martie, This is you, splashed on poetry's canvas, exqisitly dabbled in the prisms of your spirit. Liz |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A beautiful picture you've painted with your flowing words Martie ... I envision a wonderful pastel watercolour painted with the brush of your delicate pen ... just lovely! ![]() Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Most wonderful poetry flows as soft, sweet melody from words penned by you, Martie... Most exquisite work here... regards, sudhir |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am swirling in paint pull me out throw me against the canvas see all my melt and fathom This cowboy was in need of some fresh paint and look what was thrown his way. A little tube of paint with a Martie head. Beautiful write my friend. loved the intensity and the uniqueness of this. You glow in your words. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
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