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Sacred Second Vows with Interlude
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Sacred Second Vows with Interlude |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Sacred Second Vows with Interlude Your face has become the face that resides within my soul makes me entirely whole brings warmth through the cold I hang my head in wanton shame. I took a solemn, sacred vow to love, honor and cherish till that day that he is gone and our love would rightly perish You are not the one to blame. But to you, may I give the hope that long may you live to be here, right here with me when I’m alone and set free For I am not worthy of your devotion Your heart has spoken and with your core there’s no voice needed to hear passion’s roar and tides will ever sweep this ocean so to you, my second sacred vow that when time passes, it may allow our hearts to thus be so entwined and with renewed love, call you mine. and perhaps someday we’ll share this emotion… if only on another plane… Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-25-2000).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Ohhhhh, Karilea - this is a WONDERFUL poem!!!! This really sings! I love the intertwined scheme, too. This is terrific. |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Sunshine, this is so beautiful, as with all your work or arts. I feel your need, I feel your want.... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Vow... WOW regards, sudhir (does that say enuff  ) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I want to sent this to someone and tell then - you speak my thoughts - it is so 'dead on' I find it scary. I guess I should thank you ~wry smile~ and I probably won't send it - but it sure is well written |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LongJohn, I'll take your terrific and raise you a wonderful moment... Susan, that you FEEL this is wonderful! Thanks!... Sudhir, WOW says it all... Mr. Yeats, I no longer ask my Muse why, I just reach for the sky...thanks... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you, denise! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Karilea, these are just amazing. . . there really isn't another word. . . Wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
The word excellence fails to describe this piece...Karilea a stunning poem. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
what can I say that hasn't been said already? Ummmm....beautifully written and oh!!...I'm too touched by your words to praise much more... Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, Brian, Sonjes, you all are too kind! Thank you all for your kind words... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I like the gifts your muses bring ...  Thank you for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, muses are having a fine time lately! I have some particular muses that have been paying attention to YOU as well... |
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