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Circle of Love |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Lives that span more than time More than distance, this place We share a clandestine circle For now only room for two, Soon to amplify in arms of love, Enclosing a family with joy. Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah! Touchè! WONDERFUL WORK, Corinne, Regards, sudhir |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
corinne, beautiful thought and wonderfully written. "Beyond all this good is the terror,The grip of a mercenary hand,When savagery turns all good reason, There's no turning back, no last stand,"I.Curtis |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was beautful. Your choice of words were perfect.  Jenn E |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
ahhhhhh..... short and simple beautiful and concise these are the elements to which makes your poem a delight lol i tried on that lil' attempt, hope u liked "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- me |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Lives that span more than time" Hi Corinne, this piece has something of an ethereal quality to it...captivating! ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sudhir, Merci! Thank you Brian and JennE! Wonderful response poem, JNR4Eva, thank yhou! Claire, thank you! Corinne |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ This is a lovely thing !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, Marge! Corinne |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corinne, wonderful poem, I see circles of love here. So were a clan are we...... so don't we need a Scottish name for that.  The Clan McPoets The Clan McWriters The clan McRon The Clan McToe The clan McPassion All the ladies could become part of the clan McParker.... McParker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Aye, me laddie, a clan yes, but an Irish one! What is all this Scot's rubbish??? Ha, hahahahaha! Sowing the seeds of love, seeds of love, sowing the seeds of love! Corinne |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Corinne.... Your words have brought joy to this family!! Beautiful........ Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We need a "bingo" button for you...always on target! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
How about the Bard's of the Druids. A true Irish clan... Does the Irish ever us Mc...? I bow to the Queen of the clan, and kiss thy lovely hand, and since I'm down here... The Clan McBailey. Parker, serving the ladies of the clan as best I can.  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
So simple, thoughtful and beautiful. Doff of the hat here! jwesley |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Sunny! Sunshine - A button I'd proudly sport, thanks! Park, um, you seem to have left one sentence unfinished??? I believe maybe the Irish originally populated Scotland, some wise man told me so, anyway! Jwesley - thank you so much! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Oh, believe me I would never leave something unfinished. Park |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow - very short yet spoke volumes . I thought this one was one of your beter ones as you managed to cram so much into just a few sentences . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
With such a simple verse you have said volumes in wonderment. Beautifully done. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
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