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And Your First 30 Minute's ?
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And Your First 30 Minute's ? |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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And Your First 30 Minute’s Alarm clock (sigh) Perfect Persian pouncing (ouch) Last night’s mess Dog stretches Rocking chair a waits Perfect cup of coffee Darken shy, billowy clouds Slivered moon Tepid air, soft breeze Massive majestic tree’s Crowing rooster Spider tidbits Hoot Owl Wild dogs Crickets sing Second perfect cup of coffee City light’s Humming of man made devices Weather report Wear’s my cloths? Out of milk Washer off track and (NO) laundry soap Third perfect cup of coffee Trash day (yuck) Lunches out the door Dishes await Kitty kisses Computer hum Passions here I come Good morning By, Cerenity By all means add to this perfectly normal morning, "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfect morning's just begun when sitting under rising sun that rises just to greet YOUR face and take you up in warm embrace and there is not a morning rare that I don't take a moment to stare into the face of moments to be and greet each with humility wonder of folks I've not yet met except for the wonder of Internet so it's no surprise that my computer resides by a window, so that He may look inside and be with me, and with you to follow us the whole day through... [Oh Cerenity...not to compare with yours, but look at what you did!] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Delightful Cerenity...I can see you clinging on to that cup of coffee as all these new day thoughts flow through your mind.....so I have to say good morning to you!! Great poem!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Yes fascinating as well.... regards, sudhir |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunshine, Wonderful poetry friend, I go out to the porch every morning rain or shine for that first perfect cup of coffee it's my way of starting every perfect day, thank you for the lovely poem and thoughts. Hi ethome, Good morning, yep no coffee, no me just about sumes it up, thank you for your words of kindness. Hi Sudhir, Fascinating, yes I guess my life could be said to be fascinating, thank you it is awesomely fascinating. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nicely written. Enjoyable poetry, enjoyed muchly. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well good morning to you as well. I can relate as I am sure most come. I think me will chose the third cup of coffee and let the other ones go today.LOL Wonderful read. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Cerenity.... When I read this, I looked around to see if you were standing here....you just described my daily routine!! Great job, my friend!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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susanbartee Member
since 2000-08-15
Posts 119Channelview, TX USA |
Cerenity, loved this. Alot can happen in the first 30 minutes of our day. And you describe it so well. I'll add some later on (at work now and no computer at home). Sunshine, loved your work as well. Absolutely beautiful, both of you. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
No alarm clock ringing here Just four big dogs in my face so clear Jumping on the bed to start my day Cmon Mom get up lets play No coffee for me cant stand the stuff Tea or juice in my coffee cup One last toss of the ball and its shower time If im quick I can even get on line Watching the clock gotta go gotta run Bye now folks its sure been fun |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Mike, Thank you so much, Mark, Great Idea me think's I will, thank you, Sunny, Ah, I think we are soul sisters, we seem to have so much in common, thank you much, Susan, I will be looking forword to your wonderful add on's, thanks, Paula, I used to drink tea, but then I had kids and went to the strong stuff, hehe My list of morning attackers: 1. Junior a male Macaw 2. Clhoe a Female Cockatoo 3. Tilly & Fox Parakeets 4. Bell a Persian Kitten 5. Ditz a 120 lb. Shep/malumute 6. Little Bit a weenie Dog Hows this for going total nuts in the morning, this is not to mention a husband and two teenage girls,  Love to all, Cerenity |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
(from some time back) Wake Up Shower It's 5 AM Climb out of bed Bent over - erect To bath, half awake Sit back for release Tip pushed down Turn on shower To Kitchen for OJ Swallow vitamin Brush teeth Still half conscious Step in shower Life begins again Almost immediately Dream returns Tilt head back Hair wet - shampoo Your hair I'm washing Your scalp I'm kneading Your hair I'll be combing Long rinse Soap arms (Aren't yours softer? Shoulders, Chest (Should be yours) Scrub back - (yours again) Soft pubes - Oh yes! Eyes closed Feel you close Loud truck on street Reverie blown Soap legs, rinse Get out Day begins I really enjoyed C - thank you |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sounds like you are the calm in the eye of the storm---I think you live up to our name much better than I, my serene sister!!!! Enjoyed this one very much. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Cerenity, love this lots. I just have a few lines Try not to spill the coffee, strong the keyboard cleanup takes too long.. catalinamoon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Cerenity! I think I'll join you for coffee!  Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wilfred, Awesome read and wonderful to met you welcome to passions, thank you so much. Hi Serenity, Hey sis yes its a job to just fed this crew, it is so strange to type Serenity the right way, do you find it strange my way? Thank you so much. Hi Cat, My pour key board has seen it all, thank you for your sweet reply. Hi Denise, How are you friend I have not seen you in a long time of coarse im a ditz's lately, you are welcome at my house anytime just stop on by thanks. Thank you all for you kind words, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm fine, Cerenity, thanks. I just haven't had has much time online as I did in the past. The coffee sounds wonderful...be right there! Denise |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Cerenity a wonderful morning ritual. I think I should start following this. loved the poem. "I concede relationships have left me weak Won't be here so I don't care Look for something worthy to replace my guilt" Mansun legacy |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ My ! My ! I also drink the morning in with a cup of strong coffee ... Sanity's moment of 'cerenity'. Delightful write, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Cerenity - TWO cups of coffee in the first 30 minutes?? And you got all those other things done, too? Geesh - I'm doing good to plant my feet on the floor! lol - This is a very sweet poem - I can see your day as if I was there psst, pull your curtains, that frumpy robe does NOTHING for you - lol |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here .... what a wonderful way to start my morning Cerenity, I really enjoyed this verse! Grateful it's a Saturday today, and I get a little more time to play. Now about all these critters you've got!!! I bow in admiration for your menagerie of furry and feathered friends, for I've had: Beaker the cockatiel, Sheba the cockatoo and Piggy the Guinea Pig (all at the same time), then Misty the German Shepherd, followed by Kramer the GreenWinged Macaw, and finally ... Lacey the Australian Shepherd. How on earth do you do it all at the same time with 2 teenage girls and a husband!?!?! I applaud you!!! Loved this poem, have a great morning Cerenity! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Sudhir, You are so welcome, Serenity, Thank you, Denise, Great i'll be waiting, Brian, Are you sure I start at 3:30 a.m. YES thats right 3:30 a.m. Marge, and you are so right I blindly find the pot and strong more like mississippi mud also I love this Sanity's moment of Cerenity thank you, L.J.A. Hey thats three cups and I never put them down through all of this, and that frumpy old robe I just got broke in hehe, Kit, I do it very loudly of coarse you know that Macaws do nothing quiet, oh and when reading your reply I realized (now you know my secret BRAIN DEAD) I forgot the three Chichillas Molley, Cherry, and sweet little Cheechee And ALL humans are on there own! right when is a teenager or husband ever on there own!!!!!!!! Love to all, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cerenity, I also like to drink in the morning with my morning cuppas, three, in my case tea. Lovely poem Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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