A Breath of Fresh Air (sometimes we all need one)

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Open Poetry #9

A Breath of Fresh Air (sometimes we all need one)

susanbartee
Member

since 2000-08-15

Posts 119
Channelview, TX USA

0 posted 2000-08-24 05:07 PM

A Breath of Fresh Air

Where is she? Where did she go?
I haven’t seen her in days
It’s like she just disappeared
Please help me find her.

I’ve looked here, I’ve looked there
I still can’t find her
Please help me find her
Before it’s too late.

We spoke a few days ago
She seemed to be just fine
And now she’s gone
What do I do now?

I think I just caught a glimpse of her
I know it was her
She seemed to act different
But, I think it was her.

There she is now
I must talk with her
I have to see what happened
I’m sure there’s a logical explanation.

Are you okay?
I’ve been so worried.
I thought something might have happened to you
Please talk to me.

“Well, I remember a feeling of being trapped
Four walls were closing in on me
The pressure was so much I couldn’t stand it
I had to get away for awhile.

I’m back though
And I feel so much better
I just needed a little room to breathe
So I took a walk for a breath of fresh air.

10/28/96
Susan Bartee

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

1 posted 2000-08-24 09:58 PM

I feel I tapped a phone conversation - or overheard two talking in the next booth- - this IS a breath of fresh air!

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

2 posted 2000-08-24 10:15 PM

Hi Susan,

This is so great, I have been stuck in some pretty sragnate air lately maybe I should spend some time with a good friend Miss. Mother Nature yep she is one of my releifs and I have not been seeing much of her. Wonderful work here my friend enjoyed much.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

3 posted 2000-08-24 11:04 PM

where is she? beautiful and welcome back your a breath of fresh air.

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