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Two for Dinner
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Two for Dinner |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Two for Dinnerglimmer, the candlight's glaze hungry, each moment, ablaze rapacious, delicious reflection Heaven, the fare of selection |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Claire. . . What's on the menu? I think I have a wine that goes with that. . . Simply wonderful my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Claire, Did you order the pizza yet? Remember, I want a deep dish meat lovers with extra cheese. Good one!  Michael |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven ~ Menu? What menu?? But do bring the wine, if you please. Michael ~ ah yes, the meat lovers special. It's on its way. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Claire this must be candlelight dinner in bed...yes...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi Claire, Well, now if you have that extra chair ready, and enough dinner for two, especially by candlelight, I'll be there. I am a little hungry tonight. |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Meadowmuse: What's wrong with everybody!!!!! It is strawberries dipped in chocolate served with champagne served on a candlelit table as two lovers gaze into each other's eyes. Can't everybody see it?? didi |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Ahhhh Claire, a short but sweet poem... now that is more to my taste....pun intended. Robert if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, you think?? Bill, dinner is still very warm...and the candles are still glowing. Bring your appetite didi, yes...that and so much more... Thank you for reading!Robert, I enjoyed your tasteful reply. There are times when few words are needed, wouldn't you agree? ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Heaven, the fare of selection - awesome line! A perfect piece to whet the appetite! Corinne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fabulous, Claire! Very beautiful! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Corinne, thank you. I rather enjoyed that line too. This little piece just sort of fell together at a friend's invitation to an intimate dinner. Denise, thanks so much for reading, and for the encouraging words. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
and again I say WOW lovely way with words you have Claire ~Heather |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
OMG, did I miss this one... so sorry... usually don't miss much around in this heaven... Well, what I now read is beautiful without compare... now I know, I have learnt how a few words make a world of difference... your talent, ability, skills shine... enjoyed this... regards, sudhir |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
XAngel, Heather, thank you so much for your "wow" You certainly have a way with replies! Sudhir, I thank you, in earnest, for your generous commentary. I'm glad to know you found me. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
You have captured my memory well. A candlelit dinner for two when I arrived. She had me thinking I was taking her out for fast food. She pulled the wool over my eyes. When I saw the table and the candles, man did I cry. Thank you for the bringing that delightful night back to me. The White Wolf Would the bunny like this nice carrot? I don't bite. Much. :) |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
White Wolf, thank you for reading this wee piece of writing. Your special dinner must have been lovely...and a surprise, at that ~ how very sweet of your lady. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This is the only kind of dinner, Is'nt it? lol.....I definatley see the "and so much more" you speak of. Grapes are good to, you see, you dip them in the chocolate and then feed them to your lover and he then has to lick the chocolate.......oooops, I forgot where I was, sorry.........hehehehe. Awsome mood here, I am likin it. Although, it makes me miss my souls love this eve. Warm Smiles Jenn E |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Claire~ Simply lovely. Ya' just got a way about ya' !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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