Open Poetry #9 |
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Posting a friends poem... untitled... |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA ![]() |
This is a poem a friend wrote.. I liked it so I thought (after asking him lol) I would post it ![]() Love The very word attracts me Like a moth to a lamp But unlike the moth Whose life will soon end I will continue on To enjoy the pleasure masked in pain Not realizing the destructive force it is Many will tell me You will find a special some one And then you will be happy But when that happens I’ll not know For I am cold A reptile And when the heat of the lamp hits I hide |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
very deep meaning indeed... totally different aggle... well written If I should fall again, then they will laugh but what if just this one I rise? Avanti Rao |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
rosepetals25... Your friend writes wonderful verse that makes one think!!! I liked how he described love as destructive....too often we forget how rough it can be!! Tell your friend I enjoyed his writing!! I have but one goal in life......... To make you smile! ~~ Sunny ~~ |
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