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Twilight |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle 
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Twilight Mirrored reflection on mountaintop minehole reveals conical tips of stately fir trees. Dew-captured twigs outstretched in beggars fashion; twitching like bad nerves struck unaware by north breeze. Tall cat-o-nine tails bow their bodies in top-heavy slump, baptising foreheads in Heaven's bucket of raindrops collected. Gray-edged clouds creep sporatically into blue skies, wishing to join hands to ease their bellies well-fed. Gilded birds sing brightly their praises of adoration; downy feathertip to feathertip freely soar while golden glow of sun lazily shutters. In light waning, their song faintly heard evermore. chanson~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Chanson, you have painted some of the most wonderful images in a most pleasing way... and your command of over the language shines through like the sun's first rays through the twilighted daze... regards, sudhir |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Sudhir, so very kind your reply. *humble bow*...Thank you and pleased your enjoyed the poem ...chanson~ |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Chanson, Awesome description in poetic beauty! Wow, I loved the scene you painted with your artistic pen. Simply devine. Marcy |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Marcy, I am pleased you like. I enjoy nature, the power and beauty of it all. Thank you!  ...chanson~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Chanson...this was a delight to read...I could feel this |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I am thankful when my poetry can be felt. Thank you, Paula, very much ...chanson~ |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
A really delightful read Chanson |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
English Rose, thank you ...chanson~ |
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