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Upon the Wind on Wings
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Upon the Wind on Wings |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia 
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Rise upon a feathered wing, High above the world. Fly to where the heart sings, Let your wings unfurl. Soar above the mountaintops, Above the rocky ground. Float on air towards the sun, To where the peace is found. Two hearts that soar upon the breeze, Free from chains about the feet. With wings they fly into the sky, To taste the love so sweet. Fly with me, be not alone, Take wing with me my love. High above the world below, We'll soar like two white doves. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is a winner.... lovely poem... great sentiments... nice words regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This has a lovely flow Linda ... and such tender and loving sentiments! I enjoyed this beautiful image!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is fabulous writing! Rise upon a feathered wing, High above the world. Fly to where the heart sings, Let your wings unfurl. Soar above the mountaintops, Above the rocky ground. Float on air towards the sun, To where the peace is found. Two hearts that soar upon the breeze, Free from chains about the feet. With wings they fly into the sky, To taste the love so sweet. If only it was possible to do so! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Oh if only... Lovely imagery Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I loved this flight of fancy, Linda...smooth and breezy...nice landing too...smiles to ya this morn'... |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Beautiful, serene poem that just makes me want to *sigh* !! Very light and airy, with a warm and loving feel about it. Very nice! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YES soaring on loves wings...beautiful |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Pretty, warm, embracing. jwesley |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
You are all so encouraging, thank you I was amazed at the response to this one, so many, so quickly. Best wishes to you all, happy writing. Linda M. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Oh to soar with the wind... lovely! |
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