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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Separate thoughts filled with separate dreams Separate gardens of beautiful things Separate souls dancing their way Separate nights, separate days Separate friends out on the town Separate emotions, hearts pound Separate islands of separate souls Separate wishes, dreams, separate goals Separate checks for separate lives Separate husbands with separate wives < !signature--> Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... [This message has been edited by HM3 (edited 08-23-2000).] |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Sounds like my life..lol. I like!  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Uggg...somehow I can relate to this! This is not good, that I can do that...Very interesting take on people's lives here. Separate saddens me. *sigh* Interesting indeed! Bravo! |
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Auguste 
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I've seen many marriages just like this. Well written. Michael |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
How familiar this sounds. Incredible write, so true, to the point. Seperate...in so many ways. Funny how you can be with someone and yet be more sepertaed together then if you were acually apart. Great read. Jenn E |
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